增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿)，并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Since an early age, I have been told to be kind to others. One day I was in line at our local post office. Behind me stood a man, which coat was dirty and ragged. It was clearly that he hadn't bathed or change his clothes for a long time. Hardly had he come in that the others stood back several foot away from him. In fact, I didn't notice her at first. After I had my business finishing, I turned back to see what had been taken place. Turning to leave, I said to him, “Wish you nice day!” The man nodded, a big smile in his face.

    I was at the chemist collecting my daughter's medication and she asked me to go into the shop next door to get some energy drinks for her.She was about to travel on a train and she tires easily.The shop did not have what she wanted so I went to the garage near my home.As I came out of the garage I could see Margaret across the busy road. I thought to myself she-d just got off the bus and was on her way to her daughter's house which is next door to me.I thought I'd give her a lift to her daughter's house.

    Then from across the busy road I could see the elderly lady I thought was Margaret going in a different direction down a different side street.I was surprised because I was really sure it was Margaret.In fact,I was so sure that I took the trouble of waiting to drive across the busy road to go to Margaret.

    By the time I caught up with the elderly lady she was at the bottom of a dead end and looked confused as she didn't recognize where she was.It was indeed Margaret.Though I have spoken to her before and given her a lift,she needed reminded of who I was.Margaret got in my car.

    We arrived at her daughter's house,it seemed in darkness and I didn't think Julie was in.I told Margaret to go and check.I had to take Lauren to the train station.If Julie wasn't at home I'd bring Margaret back to her own house.I went to my house and Lauren got in the car,then I saw Julie with Margaret.

    Margaret thought I was kind to her today.Truth is though that her thankful words will stay with me for a long time.I'm so happy too that the first shop I went to didn't have what Lauren wanted otherwise I' d never have got this beautiful compliment or more importantly, to help Margaret.

1）地理位置：欧洲西北部，面向大西洋；气候：冬暖夏凉，整年雨量充足。

2）人口约6.648万；面积约24.41万平方千米。

3）历史悠久，景点众多，如：大本钟(Big Ben)、格林威治(Greenwich)等；世界工业化最早的国家之一，对人类工业化做出了贡献。

4）祝游客们玩得开心。

参考词汇：1）工业化 industrialize  2）人类工业化 human industrialization  3）大西洋the Atlantic Ocean

注意：

1）词数80左右；

The Internet has opened a new world of opportunity for even the smallest home­based business owner. There are a great number of self­made millionaires (百万富翁) that have achieved their success on the Internet. Do you want to know their secrets of being successful?

If a company doesn't care enough about its own domain name (域名), customers may not feel comfortable when doing business. A company with its own domain name and a professional­looking website will have a much higher rate of success.

A website can present both you and your business directly. Creating a professional website takes a lot of time and efforts, as there are many more things to think about than the website's design. You must give your visitors a reason to visit and continue to visit your website in the future; just provide your visitors with fresh contents.

Your words are the foundation (基础) of your business. Your product, website and marketing strategies all depend on your words. You must learn how to write persuasive (有说服力的) words especially for your customers. You must feel your customers' needs and write with passion, excitement and consideration.

As an Internet business owner, it is your personal responsibility to make sure that your visitors feel very comfortable with you and your website. In order to gain confidence and your visitor's trust, you first have to build your credibility (信誉)．

Your attitude is the most important factor in determining your success. You must think positively and be willing to deal with any difficulties that come along. All you must do is to believe that you can do whatever you put your mind to.

    (eat) an egg a day may lower your risk of cardiovascular disease, a study of more than 400,000 adults in China(suggestion).

    Daily egg eaters had an 18% lower risk of dying from cardiovascular(心血管的) disease, manifests(表现，显现) as heart attacks and strokes,(compare) with adults who avoided eggs, accordingthe research published Monday in the journal Heart.

    (Common) called heart disease, cardiovascular disease includes heart (fail), arrhythmias(心律不齐) and heart valve problems in addition to strokes and attacks. Raised blood pressure, carrying too much (weigh) or obesity, and elevated(提升) blood sugar all contribute to the risk of cardiovascular disease, which trigger (引发)by unhealthy diet, physical inactivity, smoking and(harm)use of alcohol.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

At 8:00 am, we gather at the foot of Longzhou Mountain and set out in high spirit. All the way we were chatting with and laughing, enjoying the beauty scenery. That impressed me most was that when some students fell behind, others would offer help. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. With strong will and encourage from each other, we spent four hours struggled to the top of the mountain. When we made that to the destination, we felt proud for the joint efforts we made along the way. From the activity organizing by our school, I realize there is no sweet without sweat.

    How can you make a million dollars in one month? I'm sure I am going to get the 1 of many readers with the question. The 2 news is that you are not going to make a million dollars in one month 3 you win the lottery (彩票) or some other prize.

    We all want to be millionaires. However, if you try to 4 how they became that rich, you will learn that they worked very 5for the money. That is what most 6have had to do, including Bill Gates and Andrew Carnegie, and they often went 7 hardships before they succeeded 8.

    There are many reasons why the millionaires have made it 9 for themselves. In this article, I am going to 10passion (热情) which I think is the most 11 quality to have in order to succeed. I am sure that if one were to 12 the people who made millions in their lifetime, this would be found in all of them.

    Take J.K. Rowling for 13. Her first Harry Potter book was sent to twelve publishing houses, all of which 14 to publish it. A year later, she was finally given the chance by a small 15, which paid ￡1,500. And the 16from that company was that she should get herself a job since she had little 17 of making a living by writing children's books.

    If you want to make a million dollars, find something that18 you really passionate and work hard at it. It doesn't 19 what it is. Let me know how you 20.

    I was required to read one of Bernie Siegel's books in college and was hooked on his positivity from that moment on. The stories of his unconventional1and the exceptional patients he wrote about were so2 to me and had such a big3on how I saw life from then on.

    Who knew that so many years later I would look to Dr. Bernie and his CDs again to4my own cancer experience?

    I'm an ambitious5, and when I started going through chemo(化疗), even though I'm a very6 person, I lost my drive to write. I was just too tired and not in the7. One day, while waiting to go in for8, I had one of Dr. Bernie's books in my hand. Another patient9what I was reading and struck up a conversation with me10 he had one of his books with him as well. It11that among other things, he was an eighty-year-old writer. He was 12a published author, and he was currently13on a new book.

    We would see each other at various times and14friends. Sometimes he wore a duck hat, and I would tell myself, he was definitely a(n) 15of Dr. Bernie. He really put a 16on my face. He unfortunately17 last year due to his cancer,18he left a deep impression on me and gave me the 19 to pick up my pen again. I20to myself, "If he can do it, then so can I."