假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Some phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to our friends and family. And our life, study and work will be hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile, it’s absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoor activities.

 It is_________ any wonder that his friend doesn't like watching television much.

  A. no        B. such       C. nearly     D. hardly

As you grow rapidly through your teenage years，you will experience a lot of changes. The changes may seem difficult and they may seem to happen quickly. Don’t panic！You will deal successfully with them！You are a young adult now!

With more responsibility，you will find more freedom to make your own choices. This is a time to be well informed about your choices so that you can make healthy balanced decisions that will help shape your future. You may already know your career path or you may have no idea at all what you want to do. Both situations are fine！Work hard and the right opportunity will present itself to you.

Young adulthood means greater freedom and more choices. You will probably want to be independent. But try not to shut your family out of your life. You should learn to think of others even though you are old enough to look after yourself. Your family have been with you since you came into this world.

It is also perfectly natural in this time for you to spend more time with your friends than your family. Choose your friends wisely. A true friend will stand by you no matter what happens.

This period is part of the life cycle. There are some people who will be with you throughout life's journey and there will be some people with whom you part and go separate ways. Leaving school can be hard. The reality is that you may not ever see all of your classmates again.

You are a young adult. It is your life. No one can live it for you. The choices that you make from now on will be your choices. So making the right choices will be important to you. Life is for living. Enjoy your life wisely!

40．The best title for this passage would be   ________.

 A．The Choices in Life          B．The Key to Success

C．Say Goodbye to the Past       D．Becoming a Young Adult

41．Who do the underlined words “some people” (Paragraph 5) probably mean?

A．your parents  B．your deskmates  C．true friends  D．your relatives

42.  The author thinks teenage years are ________.

     A. a period of complete freedom    B. too hard for young people to get through

     C. an important time for the young to make the right choices

     D. a very important period for young students to leave their parents

43. Who is the passage mainly written for?

     A. Teenagers   B. Teachers   C. Young parents    D. Adults

_{According to the US government, wind farms off the Pacific coast could produce 900 gigawatts of electricity every year．Unfortunately, the water there is far too deep for even the tallest windmills to touch bottom．An experiment under way off the coast of Norway, however, could help put them anywhere．
　　The project, called Hywind, is the world’s first large-scale deepwater wind turbine (涡轮发电机)．Although it uses a fairly standard 152-ton, 2．3-megawatt turbine, Hywind represents totally new technology．The turbine will be fixed 213 feet above the water on a floating spar, a technology Hywind’s creator, the Norwegian company StatoilHydro, has developed recently．The steel spar, which is filled with stones and goes 328 feet below the sea surface, will be tied to the ocean floor by three cables ; these will keep the spar stable and prevent the turbine from moving up and down in the waves．Hywind’s stability in the cold and rough sea would prove that even the deepest corners of the ocean are suitable for wind power．If all goes according to the plan, the turbine will start producing electricity six miles off the coast of southwestern Norway as early as September．
　　To produce electricity on a large scale, a commercial wind farm will have to use bigger turbines than Hywind does, but it’s difficult enough to balance such a large turbine so high on a floating spar in the middle of the ocean．To make that turbine heavier, the whole spar’s center of gravity must be moved much closer to the ocean’s surface．To do that, the company plans to design a new kind of wind turbine, one whose gearbox (变速箱) sits at sea level rather than behind the blades．
　　Hywind is a test run, but the benefits for perfecting floating wind-farm technology could be extremely large．Out at sea, the wind is often stronger and steadier than close to shore, where all existing offshore windmills are planted．Deep-sea farms are invisible from land, which helps overcome the windmill-as-eyesore objection．If the technology catches on, it will open up vast areas of the planet’s surface to one of the best low-carbon power sources available．
1．The Hywind project uses totally new technology to ensure the stability of_________.
　　A．the cables which tie the spar to the ocean floor
　　B．the spar which is floating in deep-sea water
　　C．the blades driven by strong and steady sea wind
　　D．the stones filled in the spar below the sea surface
2．To balance a bigger turbine high on a floating spar, a new type of turbine is to be designed with its gearbox sitting_________.
　　A．on the sea floor
　　B．on the spar top
　　C．at sea level
　　D．behind the blades
3．Wide applications of deepwater wind power technology can_________.
　　A．solve the technical problems of deepwater windmills
　　B．make financial profits by producing more turbines
　　C．settle the arguments about environmental problems
　　D．explore low-carbon power resources available at sea}

假定你是李华，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客，但是她不知道中国人做客有哪此传统，她给你发了一封电子邮件，请你给她一些建议。请你根据下列要点，给她回复一封电子邮件。

要点如下：

1．适当地送一些礼物。

2．介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1．词数100左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy,

I have received your email. You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China. ______________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

  A dog is a man’s best friend. To some he is a ___61___(faith) hunter and to others he is merely a decoration. To me, my dog Murphy is my greatest teacher, ___62___ love of life teaches me something new each day. She teaches me to appreciate ___63___(wake) up every morning and how to push my limits to see how far I can go.

  As a young dog, Murphy ate something that had gone bad. She ___64___(take) to an animal hospital. I woke up that morning and did not find her. All day I was ___65___(scare) and upset. I got through a day of work worrying and wondering. That night when I went to pick her up, she took one look at me and was shining with happiness. Her tail was going a mile a minute. It was at that minute ___66___ I knew everything would be OK. I knew we’d get it ___67___ together. This is when she taught me kindness. Now, every day without fail I come home to a dog who will hug and kiss me.

  Murphy does not always listen to me ___68___ we have a bone, a respect for each other that cannot be described. We’re best friends and equals but when the time comes she knows who ___69___ boss is. Roger Caras once said, “Dogs are not our whole life, but they make our lives whole.” Murphy has been a part of my life ___70___(make) it a whole.

France is a main destination for U.S. travelers, _______ second only to the United Kingdom, according to _______ Commerce Department report.  

A. 不填; a                   B. 不填; the             C. a; a                  D. the; the

Sandra Bullock turned 51 last month.But because she looks exactly the same as she did in Miss Congeniality,a movie filmed back in the 20th century,everyone calls her”ageless.”Bullock is just one of a number of stars in their 40s and 50s who’ve had birthdays recently but have not gotten older,unlike the rest of us in their age group.Take Halle Berry.One website put a photo of her 20 years ago next to one of the newly 49-year-old Berry and dared us to choose which was which.”This is What 49 Looks Like,”it said.Seriously,if that’s what 49 looks like,I must be 71.

However,even a generation ago,famous face evolved.Look at a picture of Grace Kelly at age 52 in the early 1980s.She look like a beautiful middle-aged woman.Today she’d look old for her age.

The goal now is to prevent aging while you are still young,using all the magical nonsurgical options medicine has to offer.Eventually these techniques will become less expensive,and ordinary people my daughter’s age will have them.Already anti-aging is starting to be considered maintenance,like coloring your hair.My friends and I find ourselves openly debating techniques that we used to make fun of.Does fat-freezing work?How much time do you have to spend in the gym to keep the body of a 35-year-old after 50?It’s all so exhausting.But members of the next generation have it tougher.They’ll have to ask themselves whether they want to spend their youth trying not to get old.I’ve already seen”Sexy at 70”headlines.Will everyone be expected to go to their graves（坟墓）looking hot?

I also have to wonder what else we are slowing along with age.How do you move on if you’re working so hard to stay the same?And besides,if you’ve known the ache of watching a daughter pack up for college,you know you can’t stop the clock.

28.In the author’s eyes,Sandra Bullock         .

A.doesn’t deserve her name                          B.doesn’t look her age at all

C.behaves like a young woman                     D.looks younger than Halle Berry

29.The example of Grace Ketty is given to show .

A.physical beauty never lasts long

B.there is no such thing as agelessness

C.people’s attitude towards aging has changed

D.stars pay too much attention to their appearance

30.Where do the author’s concerns about anti-aging techniques lie?

A.They expose people to danger.                  B.They make people feel stressful.

C.They are too expensive for ordinary.          D.They encourage comparisons among people.

31.What’s the purpose of the text?

A.To show the burden of youth.                     B.To offer tips on how to look hot.

C.To advise people to accept aging.              D.To comment on some famous stars.

“You'd better not ring me up between 9 and 10

 I＿an important meeting then"，Dr. Lee said.

    A. have      B.  had           C.  was having       D.  will be having

 No sooner _____ their seats ____ the film began.

A. they have found; before                       B. had they found; than

C. have they found; when                                D. they had found; than

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of. This change in communication have good effects on our works and life. Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and Internet are fast and much more convenient. If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to him. And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It’ll be minutes after you get their reply.

The authorities ______ an orange warning of haze and urged people to stay in doors.

    A. commanded     B. struck       C. cancelled      D. issued

_____ that he isn’t adequate to the present job, he devotes all his spare time to studying

professional knowledge.

   A. Concern   B. To concern   C. Concerned   D. Concerning

 We all face quantities of stresses in day-to-day living, whether at work, in the home, or anywhere in between．   36    Here's how stress can help us on an everyday basis．

    ◆Sharpe rung your memory．

    Did you ever notice that sometimes when you are stressed, your memory seems to improve? Remember that test you passed where the answers seemed to come out of nowhere?    37  It's because of stress hormones（荷尔蒙）that increase your alertness when it's most needed．

    ◆    38

    Successful employees turn stress into motivation．Have you ever noticed that you get the least amount of work done when you have the fewest deadlines? Too little stress can affect how  much you actually get done．When you take risks and choose to get over the difficulty, it  improves your mental toughness and self-confidence．

    ◆Helping you resist the attack of illness．

    39    Believe it or not, the right kind of stress can help your body's defenses against illness．When you get sick, stress causes you to make hormones that battle threats to  your health．That burst of stress is helpful to your immune system when your body faces a  threat．

    ◆Making your life more interesting．

    Think about some stressful situations that we consciously put ourselves in to make life more  interesting and enjoyable, like asking someone out on afirst date, conquering a known fear, or learning something new．These may not immediately come to mind when you think of stress  because of the positive outcomes．   40  

       A．Helping you get an advantage at work．

       B．Helping you get through difficult times．

       C．This will happen whenever you are stressed．

       D．That's one way your brain responds to stress．

       E．You need a healthy immune system to help fight off diseases．

       F．But they're the types that can help you achieve fulfillment and happiness．

       G．But handled properly, stress can have many benefits for the body and mind．

Eventually all suns will   36   their fuel, explode and then become cold and dark. Matter itself will disappear and the universe will become   37   for the rest of time.

This was the general drift of my thoughts as my wife and I   38   my eldest son as a freshman at college. That moment at the dorm is   39   at the kindergarten door, at the gates of summer camp, at every occasion of parting and   40  . But it comes surprising, taking what you   41   most.

Our ancestors thought this parting should take place   42  . In many societies adolescents were sent away to live with friends or relatives right after adolescence. This was supposed to   43   the conflicts that come from   44   teenagers and their parents very near.

Eighteen years is not enough. The days pass uncounted, until they   45  . The adjustment is upsetting. My son is on the   46   side --- observant, thoughtful, a practitioner of companionable silence. I know this is hard on him as well. He will be homesick. Among the greatest   47   of college students is they won’t have a room at home to return to.

But with due respect to my son’s feelings, I have the   48   of parting. I know something he doesn’t --- incomprehensible to the young. He is experiencing the   49   that come with beginnings. His life is starting for real. I have begun the long letting go. Put another way: He has a wonderful future in which my part   50   decreases.

I’m sure my father realized it at a(n)   51   moment. And I certainly didn’t notice or understand. At first, he was a giant who held my hand and   52    my sky. Then a middle-aged man who paid my bills. Now, decades after his passing, a much-loved   53  . But I can remember the last time I hugged him in his home, where I always had a room. I can only hope to leave my son the same.

My son, those days have been the greatest wonder and   54   of my life. And there will always be a   55   for you.

36.                                    A. add                        B. use                        C. consume D. supply

37.                                    A. empty                     B. boundless              C. expanding       D. hopeless

38.                                    A. dropped out           B. dropped off            C. dropped in       D. dropped back

39.                                    A. delayed                  B. implied                   C. missed     D. captured

40.                                    A. reliance                  B. importance             C. responsibility D. independence

41.                                    A. wonder                   B. need                      C. value       D. miss

42.                                    A. before                    B. later                       C. afterwards      D. earlier

43.                                    A. minimize                 B. cause                     C. manage   D. settle

44.                                    A. drawing                  B. relating                  C. housing   D. seating

45.                                    A. come                      B. end                        C. break       D. start

46.                                    A. excited                   B. sad                        C. anxious    D. quiet

47.                                    A. fears                      B. pities                      C. reliefs      D. pains

48.                                    A. better                     B. pleasure                C. worse       D. benefit

49.                                    A. comprehension      B. recognition             C. adjustment      D. consideration

50.                                    A. naturally                 B. sharply                   C. immediately    D. suddenly

51.                                    A. difficult                   B. critical                    C. important  D. similar

52.                                    A. filled                       B. cleared                  C. clouded   D. broke

53.                                    A. breadwinner           B. shape                    C. guard       D. shadow

54.                                    A. pressure                B. privilege                 C. substitute        D. inspiration

55.                                    A. house                    B. chance                   C. room        D. dream

Some people will do just about anything to save money. And I am one of them. Take my family’s last vacation. It was my six-year-old son’s winter break from school, and we were heading home from Fort Lauderdale after a weeklong trip. The flight was overbooked, and Delta, the airline, offered us $400 per person in credits to give up our seats and leave the next day. I had meetings in New York, so I had to get back. But that didn’t mean my husband and my son couldn’t stay. I took my nine-month-old and took off for home.

The next day, my husband and son were offered more credits to take an even later flight. Yes, I encouraged—okay, ordered—them to wait it out at the airport to“earn”more Delta Dollars. Our total take:$1, 600. Not bad, huh?

Now some people may think I’m a bad mother and not such a great wife either. But as a big-time bargain hunter, I know the value of a dollar. And these days, a good deal is something few of us can afford to pass up.

I’ve made a living looking for the best deals and exposing(揭露)the worst tricks. I have been the consumer reporter of NBC’s Today show for over a decade. I have written a couple of books including one titled Tricks of the Trade:A Consumer Survival Guide. And I really do what I believe in.

I tell you this because there is no shame in getting your money’s worth. I’m also tightfisted when it comes to shoes, clothes for my children, and expensive restaurants. But I wouldn’t hesitate to spend on a good haircut. It keeps its shape longer, and it’s the first thing people notice. And I will also spend on a classic piece of furniture. Quality lasts.

8. Why did Delta give the author’s family credits?

A. They took a later flight.

B. They had early bookings.

C. Their flight had been delayed.

D. Their flight had been cancelled.

9. What can we learn about the author?

A. She rarely misses a good deal.

B. She seldom makes a compromise.

C. She is very strict with her children

D. She is interested in cheap products.

10. What does the author do?

A. She’s a teacher.

B. She’s a housewife.

C. She’s a media person.

D. She’s a businesswoman.

11. What does the author want to tell us?

A. How to expose bad tricks.

B. How to reserve airline seats.

C. How to spend money wisely.

D. How to make a business deal.

----Oil prices are going down almost every day. We really can’t believe it.

  ----But for the situation where frequent unrest________ lately in Russia and Ukrain, oil prices ___ so low.

  A. happened; would not be              B. has happened; would not be

  C. had happened; would not have been    D. has happened; will not be

    The family had just moved. The young woman was feeling a little __11__. It was Mother’s Day – and 800 miles separated her from her parents.

She had called them that morning, and her mother had__12__ how colorful their backyard was__ 13__ spring had arrived. Later, she told her husband how she_14__ those lilacs（丁香）in her parents' yard. “I know where we can find some,” he said. “Get the__15__ and come on.” So off they went.

    Some time later, they stopped at a hill and there were lilacs all round. The young woman rushed up to the nearest__ 16__ and buried her face in the flowers. Carefully, she__17__ some. Finally, they returned to their car for the__18__ home. The woman sat smiling, surrounded by her__19__.

    When they were near home, she shouted “stop,” got off quickly and__20__ to a nearby nursing home.  She went to the end of the porch(门廊), where a(n)__21__ patient was sitting in her wheelchair, and put the flowers into her lap. The two__22__, bursting into laughter now and then. Later the young woman turned and ran back to her__23__. As the car pulled away, the woman in the wheelchair__24__ with a smile, and held the lilacs__25__.

“Mom,” the kids asked, “__26___ did you give her our flowers?” “It is Mother's Day, and she seems so__27__ while I have all of you. And anyone would be__28__ by flowers.”

This satisfied the kids, but not the husband. The next day, he__29__ some young lilacs around their yard.

I was the husband. Now, every May, our yard is full of lilacs. Every Mother's Day our kids__30__ purple lilacs. And every year I remember that smile of the lonely old woman.

11. A. moved               B. worried            C. angry               D. depressed

12. A. learned                    B. imagined      C. mentioned             D. realized

13. A now that                    B. so that                    C. as if                 D. even if

14. A. missed                     B. grew                C. watered       D. showed

15. A. cars                  B. kids          C. clothes        D. lilacs

16. A. bush                 B. hill                    C. yard          D. door

17. A. bought                     B. picked                     C. set                   D. raised

18. A. break                B. holiday             C. trip                   D. dinner

19. A. friends                     B. memory       C. flowers        D. honor     

20. A. responded        B. pointed            C. drove         D. hurried     

21. A. loving                B. elderly        C. serious                  D. sensitive

22. A. hesitated           B. waited                     C. sat                   D. chatted

23. A. family                B. mother                    C. path                 D. home

24. A. nodded                    B. waved                     C. left                   D. continued

25. A. sadly                 B. politely             C. quickly             D. tightly

26. A. Why                  B. When               C. How                 D. Where

27. A. quiet                 B. confused         C. alone         D. patient 

28. A. calmed                     B. persuaded              C. disappointed   D. cheered

29. A. arranged           B. dried                C. planted            D. hid

30. A. find                   B. gather                     C. receive            D. sell

A broad smile spread_____ Jack’s face when he eventually gained a scholarship.

A. across                      B. through                 C. at                D. in