假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together on that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October, 1621. In 1620, the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They had expected to find a freely place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring, we began farming. With the help of local Indians, they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the autumn, the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God, they held a celebration. In 1863, it became a national holiday.

    On a diet? Then consider (sit) by the window next time you eat out.

    The researchers measured and mapped the design of each restaurant and then used meal checks to track diners ordered and how it related to where they sat.

    The results were telling: people sitting (far) from the front door ate the fewest salads and (be) 73 per cent more likely to order desserts. Those seated at a dark table ate (heavy) food and ordered more of it, but diners sitting at high-top bar tables (order)more salads and fewer desserts.

    The darker it is, the more "invisible" you might feel, the less easy  is to see how much you're eating and the less guilty you might feel. Seeing the sunlight, passers-by or trees outside might make you more aware of how you look, might make you think about walking or might inspire you (choose) a green salad.

    The researchers also noted that slim diners chewed around (time) per mouthful, three chews more than heavier diners. By eating more slowly, the diner spends less time it takes the brain to feel full.

    Sports can help you keep fit and get in touch with nature. However, whether you are on the mountains, in the waves, or on the grassland, you should be aware that your sport of choice might have great influence on the environment.

    Some sports are resource-hungry. Golf, as you may know, eats up not only large areas of countryside, but also tons of water. Besides, all sorts of chemicals and huge amounts of energy are used to keep its courses(球场) in good condition. This causes major environmental effects. For example, in the dry regions of Portugal and Spain, golf is often held responsible for serious water shortage in some local areas.

    There are many environment-friendly sports. Power walking is one of them that you could take up today. You don't need any special equipment except a good pair of shoes; and you don't have to worry about resources and your purse. Simple and free, power walking can also keep you fit. If you walk regularly, it will be good for your heart and bones. Experts say that 20 minutes of power walking daily can make you feel less anxious, sleep well and have better weight control.

    Whatever sport you take up, you can make it greener by using environment-friendly equipment and buying products made from recycled materials. But the final goal should be "green gyms". They are better replacements(代替物) for traditional health clubs and modern sports centers. Members of green gyms play sports outdoors, in the countryside or other open spaces. There is no special requirement for you to start your membership. And best of all, it's free.

    Everybody should have some level of first aid ability, because accidents and medical emergencies can happen anywhere at any time. St John First Aid courses give you the knowledge and confidence to provide effective first aid whenever it's needed.

First Aid Level 1

    Ideal(理想的) for anyone who wants to learn basic first aid or needs to renew their first aid qualification. Courses can be held at St John or your workplace.

Fee: $162(includes GST)

Duration(持续时间): Eight hours

First Aid Level 2

    Includes all course content from First Aid Level One, plus an additional half day. Ideal for special first aiders, health and safety managers and anyone who needs a first aid qualification.

Fee: $235(includes GST)

Duration: 12 hours

Pre-Hospital Emergency Care (PHEC)

    Advanced training for first aiders who already hold unit standards 6400 and 6402. Ideal for people who require advanced first aid skills or a pre-hospital emergency care (PHEC) qualification for their work.

Fee: $635(includes GST)

Duration: Three days

Child First Aid

    Ideal for parents, grandparents and other family caregivers. A recognized qualification for childcare workers.

Fee: $65(includes GST)

Duration: Four hours

Outdoor First Aid

    First aid response for accidents and medical emergencies in the wilderness. For groups of eight or more.

Duration: One to two days depending on experience

Sports First Aid

    First aid response for common sporting injuries and medical emergencies. Includes ACC injury prevention advice.

Duration: Eight hours.

    When I called up my mother in the countryside on the phone, she told me snakes came to her home now and then, and  they seemed to have made their home there. I got the chance to distinguish by inventing something (mercy) to catch the snakes.

    No products can help me catch snakes, so I set out (research) the habits of snakes to trap them. I decided on three approaches: firstly, removing their habitat; secondly, (attract) them into  trap, and thirdly cooling them. I used the (freeze) bowl to make the snakes less active,  then collected them. The next day I released them into the wild.

    I have filled  the form and filed my patent (apply) with the Patent Office.

⒈ 时间：周五晚8点至9点

⒉ 地点：学生俱乐部

⒊ 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等

⒋ 要求：备小礼物

注意：⒈ 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；⒊ 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

Hi, Susan,

    We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.

    All scientists subscribe the view that it is human activities that have caused the global warming. Huge (quantity) of carbon dioxide produced by burning fuels like coal,  natural gas and oil (result) in the "greenhouse effect". All scientists also agree that the levels of carbon dioxide keep on (increase), so more heat energy tends to be (trap) in the atmosphere. the scientists have different attitudes towards this phenomenon. On the one hand, some think the of increasing the temperature by 5 degrees would be a catastrophe. On the other hand, others are to this view and believe that there will be few bad environmental caused by more carbon dioxide. On the contrary, they think it will be beneficial to plants, crops and a greater range of animals, will make people's life better.

短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：

1）简述漫画的内容；

2）分析漫画反映的社会问题，并阐述其产生的原因；

3）发表自己的感受，并给出解决此问题的措施。

【注意事项】

1）对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2）词数150字左右。

3）作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

参考词汇：nutritive products 营养品

    Clara Barton，founder of the American Red Cross，gained worldwide honor for her dedication to easing human suffering and earned the nickname  “Angel of the Battlefield.”

    Barton was born into a liberal (开明的) freethinking family in 1821. Her elder brothers and sisters happily tutored her in math and reading, so when she entered school at three years old, she could read and spell three-syllable words.

    Concerned about Barton's difficulty in making friends, her parents sent her to a boarding school, hoping it would make her more comfortable with her peers. Barton lost her appetite and cried constantly. After only one term, she had to be brought home. Then, Barton stayed out of school to nurse her older brother through a serious injury and also volunteered to care for poor families during a smallpox (天花）outbreak.

    In 1861，the Civil War broke out. The sight of wounded soldiers touched Barton deeply. She began to collect and distribute food, bandages, medicines, and other supplies for the Union army.

    There, with little concern for her own safety, she cooked meals, assisted surgeons, and comforted wounded soldiers.

    Eventually，because of working too hard，Barton collapsed，ill with typhoid fever (伤寒症). It was there that she learned of an organization based in Switzerland — called the International Red Cross, whose work mirrored her own.

    Shortly after Barton arrived back home in 1873，her sister died. When recuperating (休养）at a health facility in New York，she began planning for the establishment of an American wing of the International Red Cross. Although at first the government resisted，her efforts finally paid off. The American Red Cross was officially organized on May 21, 1881. Her influence lives on today in the work of the organization she founded.

    The TED speaker series features “ideas worth spreading.” With over 1,400 to choose from, we've selected a few that are perfect for students.

    ⒈Larry Smith: Why You Will Fail to Have a Great Career

    We humans have an excellent ability to make excuses for ourselves. Larry Smith, a professor of economics at the University of Waterloo in Canada, tells us why most of us will fail to have a great career. But there is a way out— if you try to pursue your passion.

    ⒉Andy Puddicombe: All It takes Is 10 Mindful Minutes

    Between dance team, volunteering and—oh, right—lectures, your life's crazy factor is about to go way up. In this entertaining and informative talk, mindfulness expert Andy Puddicombe teaches us how to be “more healthy, more mindful and less distracted” by taking just 10 minutes out of the day to be more present.

    ⒊Shane Koyczan: To This DAY For the Bullied and Beautiful

    This talk is sure to stay with you. Shane Koyczan's “To this DAY” is an affecting spoken-word poem about bullying and being different that gained over 10 million views on YouTube. In this talk, Koyczan gives a live reading of the poem, along with some stories about his background.

    ⒋Susan Cain: The power of Introverts(性格内向者)

    Does a cup of tea and a good book sound like a perfect Friday night? In this personal talk, Susan Cain argues that introverts have important talents and abilities. Our culture may value being social and outgoing, but the word needs all kinds.

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可填入空白处的最佳选项。

    The town I live in is about to put cameras at all traffic lights to catch people who run red lights. It 1 me of how many people I've seen who take the yellow light as a signal to go faster. I also can't 2 why people don't move when the traffic light has turned green. Above all, there are those 3 situations in which someone doesn't even 4 that the light is red, and just keeps going. That is why so many accidents happen! All these situations make me 5 about the purpose of traffic lights.

    However, it's even more 6 to imagine letting people make their own 7 at crowded crossroads. Do the biggest cars get to go first? Who decides who goes next? 8 I guess I do like the idea of a system to 9 traffic. And I'll do my best to 10 the traffic rules: to go, to be 11, and to stop when I'm supposed to.

    It occurs to me that my 12 have done much the same for me in 13 of teaching me how to live. They have given me many 14 lights: to get along well with others, to listen and talk to them, to help others, and to live with 15 and purpose. They have also given me some red lights so that my 16 doesn't go astray (误入歧途): not to be greedy, to keep my temper, and to control my desires. And there also have been some yellow caution lights: to watch how much I drink, to keep control of my behavior, and to 17school regularly and work hard.

    If I obey these rules, my life will be as 18 as it can be. Just as I'm wise to pay attention to the traffic lights when I'm walking 19 the street, I'm wise to pay attention to the "life 20" given to me by my parents.

—It is (多变的).