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    There is no doubt whether the Internet plays an important part in our everyday life. It can provide people with a life of highly quality. So it can also do harm to people, especially to teenagers. For an example, things such as violence and cheating often appear on the Internet, that can seriously pollute their hearts and souls (心灵). As result, children will gradually lose interest for their studies. Now it's time for the government to take some measures (措施) to deal of this problem. Some websites that breaks the rules should be punished and closed up. As students, we should also protect us from the bad influence of the Internet.

    The Chongyang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, so it is also known as the Double Ninth Festival.

    The festival is held in the golden season of autumn, at harvest time. The bright clear sky and the joy of bringing in the harvest make for a festival happy atmosphere. The Chongyang Festival is usually perfect for outdoor activities. Climbing a mountain, carrying a spray of dogwood(茱萸)and drinking chrysanthemum(菊花)wine have become the traditional activities of the festival.

    The dogwood is a plant with a strong fragrance(香气), and is often used as a Chinese herbal medicine. People in ancient times believed it could drive away evil spirits and prevent one from getting a chill(着凉)in late autumn. So its history as a medicine goes back many centuries. But the custom of carrying a spray of dogwood during the Double Ninth Festival is slowly dying out and many people in the cities do not even know what a dogwood spray looks like.

    Early in Han Dynasty, about 2000 years ago, people used to climb a high platform outside the capital city of Chang'an on the occasion of the Chongyang Festival. For many, it was the last outing of the year before the onset of winter. The custom evolved(发展成)into present form, when people go climbing to get some exercise as well as enjoy the autumn scenery.

    But what about those people who live in plains far from any mountain? The problem is solved by going for a picnic and eating cakes. The Chinese word for "cake" is "Gao", a homonym(同音异义字) of the Chinese word for "high". Mountains are high, so eating cakes can, by a stretch of the imagination, take the place of going for a climb.

—Yes. It's good weather that I'd like to take a walk.

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绍兴市2020学年第一学期高中期末调测

 depends on how you do it.

记取挑丝色浅深

江岚

“并头菡萏双飞翼，记取挑丝色浅深”，每次读到这句古诗，总会让我想到湘绣。

“五彩备，谓之绣”。

我从小喜欢小姑姑那个大大的针线盒，只记得里面放满了五色彩线，冷暖色调深深浅浅都齐备。姑姑的绣花绷子也是大小不一，我有一条白色的短裙子，姑姑在每一片的裙摆处都绣上一大朵朱槿花，浅粉，正红的丝线渐次均匀过渡。那时候，市面上的面料不多，几乎所有人的衣服都款式陈旧，颜色单调，便显得我的新衣服总是特别漂亮。

再长大一点儿，我也开始学做女红。拧紧了竹绷子，才懂得一针一线，千针万线的刺绣绝不只是穿针引线那么简单。我还记得自己绣出来的第一幅牵牛花，从绣绷上一拆下来熨半天也铺不平，除了针脚勉强算整齐之外，简直乏善可陈。

所以，在三舅奶奶家见到那一对靠枕的时候，我才会那么震惊。寡居的三舅奶奶的家，是在一家大店铺楼上租的一个不过六七平米见方的房间，门一推开，室内所有物件一览无余，那一对靠枕放在窗下一张竹制的圈椅上，黑色贡缎双绲边，绣着红梅报春。映着窗外斜斜的一缕阳光，在这个小小蜗居的简陋里华丽得十分突兀。

我径直走过去抱起来看。靠枕上的红梅怒放的姿势栩栩如生，花蕊间隐隐迸有闪光。

绣工精细得不得了，我忍不住用手指轻轻去摸，惊叹：“太漂亮了！”

“这是有名的绣品，如今也不大见得到了，叫做湘绣。”三舅奶奶笑着说，“看这朵梅花瓣！用老头小针绣出来的，每一种颜色的丝线连接相搭都不能过长，起针落针都藏在线下面，针脚不露痕迹，颜色自然掺和。这种绣法叫做‘掺针’。”那是我第一次听到“湘绣”这个词，那么精美、那么讲究的一种手工艺品。三舅奶奶和我们家一样，都是在抗日战争期间辗转到桂林落脚的。兵荒马乱中逃难，生死只在一线之间。随军的三舅公下落不明，她一个无儿无女的中年寡妇只身长途跋涉，能保得住自己一条命已是万幸，等闲的身外之物哪里还能顾得上？偏偏这一对靠枕竟然好端端地跟着她一路从四川到了桂林！

可惜等我懂事，三舅奶奶已经辞世。那两对巧夺天工的红梅落到何处报喜去了？不过“湘绣”这个词并没有随着这一对靠枕的消失而湮没。我继续跟小姑姑学绣，学会了把丝线劈成四分之一，八分之一，用珠针，离缝针……包括一点点掺针的皮毛。

五色丝线在光阴的缝隙里游走。夏天吊楼前的柚子花开了，又落了，没几年我出嫁，旋即出国。嫁妆里有两张湘绣的交织软缎被面。一张墨绿底子绣“五子图”，一张银灰底子绣“四喜图”。每年拆拆缝缝，一展开来是大大的两方五彩锦绣，整整30年不变，细细密密是亲人的祝福。盖在异邦滴水成冰的冬夜，温暖度过一年又一年与家乡与故国暌违天涯的岁月。

不过这两张被面虽庄重，绣工到底与当年三舅奶奶的靠垫不能相提并论。某一天，我去听梅葆玖先生的《贵妃醉酒》。一坐下来，立刻看见前排一位女士身上的披肩，这是一张秋香色细软缎的披肩。绣百蝶穿花，那颜色鲜明的翅膀，分明就是掺针技艺高超的刺缀运针。我几乎立刻就可以肯定，这是一幅上好的湘绣。到终场，我也顾不得冒昧，央求她给我看一眼整幅的披肩，她就好脾气地笑了，把披肩拿下来抖开，构图的虚实相生，加上用色总体的斯文清雅，实在不是寻常能见到的。我问她：“这是在哪里买的？”“不是买的”，她回答，“我祖母年轻时候到中国的长沙去，带回来3件披肩，这一件留给了我。”

果然是湘绣。这一件披肩和我三舅奶奶的靠垫，应该是差不多同时代的东西，我把披肩还给她，感慨：“这样的东西，如今在中国只怕轻易也见不到。”

“嗯，老的艺术品总不会越来越多”，她不无得意。

当然，用不着解释，真正的好东西有目共睹，走遍全世界都如此，据说湘绣总共有5大类72种针法体系，还有双面全异绣。去年秋天好不容易有机会到了长沙，见到两幅私人藏品，一幅兰草，一幅荷花，都两尺见方，运针的疾徐轻重与画稿的点线疏密水乳交融，被主人珍而重之地镶在相框里，挂在墙上，绣品这一类东西与别的艺术品不同，总带着女性指尖的温度，袖底的脂粉气，带着她们聚精会神的思量与小心翼翼的希望。仰着头看是另一回事，与拿在手里细细端详无法同日而语，于是心里多少有些悻悻然。

不过好歹通过主人了解到已经名列“世界非物质文化遗产”的湘绣技艺并不乏传人。中国女性千百年玉指飞针，低头牵引着杂乱的五色丝线，调配出对生活细腻温厚的气味。无论我是否触摸得到，总会与世间珍视它们的人深情相遇。（有删改）

    I know I should have told the headmaster at the time. That was my real 1. He had gone out of the study for some 2, leaving me alone. In his absence I looked to see 3 was on his desk. In the 4 was a small piece of paper on which were written the5 “English Writing Prize: History Is a Series of Biographies(人物传记). ”

    A(n)6 boy would have avoided looking at the title as soon as he saw the 7. I did not. The subject of the English Writing Prize was kept a 8 until the start of the exam, so I could not 9 reading it.  

    When the headmaster 10, I was looking out of the window.  

    I should have told him what had 11 then. It would have been so 12 to say, “I'm sorry but I 13 the title for the English Writing Prize on your desk. You'll have to 14it. ”

The chance passed and I did not 15 it. I sat the exam the next day and I won. I didn't mean to cheat, but it was still cheating 16.

    That was thirty-eight years 17 when I was fifteen. I have never told anyone about it before, nor have I 18 to explain to myself why not.  

    The obvious explanation is that I could not admit I had seen the title 19 admitting that I had been looking at the things on his desk. 20 there must have been more behind it. Whatever it was, it has become a good example of how a little mistake can trap you in a more serious moral corner(道德困境).  

动人的日常

安宁

①还是初春，但天气忽然就热了起来。

②当然，在房间里坐着，还是凉飕飕的。靠窗读书，我常常穿了毛衣，还要外加厚的外套，才能坐得住。阳光遍洒北国大地，就连云朵，都似乎怕热，消失得只剩下一些模糊的边缘。杨絮漫天飞舞，并借人喘气的间隙，争先恐后地朝鼻腔里跑。空气一时间变得拥堵稠密起来。

③花朵开得有些不太耐烦，懒洋洋地在阳光里站着；若是有点荫凉，它们大约都会跑过去躲上片刻。还好有风，但这会儿北疆的风也是暖的，粘稠的。人走在路上，总希望下一场雨，将杨絮从空气里全部过滤掉，只留湿润的气息，供人呼吸。

④虽然无雨，但天空还是一览无余的蓝。只是远远的天边氤氲着热气，那热气在阳光照射下，不停地晃动着，好像炉中跳跃的火焰，在不息地燃烧。

⑤阿妈在厨房里擦擦洗洗，偶尔传来一两声咳嗽。一只鸟站在窗外洒满阳光的榆树上，朝着天空发出一阵空寂的鸣叫。那叫声大约震动了簇拥的云朵，于是我一转身的工夫，窗前便换了另外的一簇。它们看上去比之前的更飘逸了一些，犹如并蒂的金银花，在那无尽的洁净的天空里，无限地延伸下去。似乎，它们已经失去了形体，只留下空灵的魂魄，以圣洁的白，漂浮在苍茫宇宙之中。

⑥我沉浸在无人打扰的寂静之中，并忽然间意识到，这样美好的片刻，才是我一直寻求的永恒之美。它无关房子的大小，无关外人的评判，无关虚荣和攀比，无关嫉妒和算计。它只与内心的宁静有关。犹如一条河，不管多少人曾经为它驻足，它都只向着远方永不停息地流去。没有哀愁，也无喜乐。是无尽的永恒的空。我因这片刻的寂静，心中涌起幸福。

⑦想起去年此时的近郊，在一大片桃树林里，忽然看到一只野猫，昂首挺胸地走在两排桃树中间的空地上。它的毛发在树隙间漏下的阳光里，闪烁着光华。这一大片郁郁葱葱的桃林，犹如它的王国，一排排桃树则是庄严肃穆的士兵方阵。风吹过桃林，树叶哗啦作响，犹如一首舒缓的奏鸣曲。而野猫就那样孤傲地走着，不关心尘世的喧哗，不关心马路上呼啸而过的车辆，不关心猎物，也不关心明天。那一刻，它高贵的灵魂里，流淌着一条自由奔放又野性不羁的河流。

⑧一场大雨刚刚清洁过整个的天地。大青山在雨雾中氤氲着，犹如浮在飘渺半空中的虚幻城堡。远远近近的树木，在湿漉漉的空气中，满含着诗意与哀愁，静默无声。

⑨我问开车的司机，大青山的青色，到底是怎样的色泽？答曰：青色是介于蓝色和黑色之间的颜色。我注视着窗外，忽然很想化成一抹深沉的青色，融入连绵起伏的群山之中。

⑩临近傍晚，雨依然纷纷扬扬地落着，伴随着轰隆轰隆的雷声，似乎在为不远的夏天敲响战鼓。夜幕中的城市，在雨中变得愈发地清寂。空气中飘荡着花朵的香气。有人打伞在道旁慢慢走着，并不着急。雨水打湿了女孩的裙脚，路灯投下昏黄的光线，女孩的影子，便落在青灰色的砖地上，有惹人怜爱的瘦。

⑪又想起一个午后，站在窗边跟朋友一起看雨。雨水敲打着窗户，发出啪嗒啪嗒的声响。整个城市都安静地沐浴在雨中。车马的喧嚣被雨水过滤后，也淡远下去，似乎声音来自遥远的天边，那里正涌动着厚重的乌云，这是北疆辽阔的天空，每一片云朵，都近在咫尺，触手可及。

⑫我跟朋友边注视着变幻不定的云朵，边细细碎碎地说着闲话。这北疆壮阔辽远的天空，让我内心忽然充满了哀愁。人的一生中，要修多少年，才能遇到一个跟你说一会闲话的人，或者一起看云的人，一起听雨的人，一起乘船的人，一起打伞的人呢？

⑬这样美好的一起看云听雨的片刻，稍纵即逝。而一旦逝去，便成为我们心中的永恒。

⑭我爱这让我心生哀愁的飘雨的季节。我爱这动人的必将让我在此后怀念的日常。

（摘编自《文汇报》2020年3月29日）