假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第II处起)不计分。Last weekend l went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me. Instead, they said l was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family rules. I'm not the best at school work, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about "Honesty is the best policy."
答案:【答案】where →which去掉forbike →bikesAsking →AskedAnd →But/Yetdon't →didn’ta →angreat →greatlyclassmates前面加上mymaking →make【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和堂兄去河边钓鱼把自行车丢了,他诚实地告诉了父母并受到了表扬,在学校,大家也因为他的诚实很喜欢他。第一处:考查定语从句。这是个非限制性定语从句,先行词是river,从句缺少主语,不能用where引导,只能用which,故将where改为which。第二处:考查介词。return是及物动词,其后可直接跟宾语,不需要借助于介词,故将for去掉。第三处:考查名词。one of后跟名词复数,表示…..之一,故将bike改为bikes。第四处:考查非谓语动词。句意:被问起那辆丢失的自行车,除了我,没有人说真话。根据上文可知,我们把自行车丢了,自然是被问,因此,此处用过去分词短语作状语,故将asking改为asked。第五处:考查连词。句意:令我惊讶的是,我的父母没有责骂我。根据上文,作者说了实话,想着父母会责备他们,父母没有责备,前后是转折关系,要用but,位于句首,首字母大写。故将And改为But/Yet。第六处:考查时态。本文叙述的是昨天发生的事情,父母没有责备我是昨天的事情,要用一般过去式,故将don’t改为didn’t。第七处:考查冠词。冠词后的honest是以元音开头,其前需用an修饰,故将a改为an。第八处:考查副词。句意:我从我的家庭规则中受益匪浅。修饰动词要用副词,而great是形容词,因此要用其副词形式,故将great改为greatly。第九处:考查代词。句意:我的学习成绩不是最好的,但是同学们相信我。英语中多习惯使用代词,此处需用形容词性物主代词来限定,更明确的表达“我的功课”,因此,在school前加my。故在school前加my。第十处:考查动词。be willing to do乐意做某事,是固定用法,故将making改为make。