假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Last Friday was my grandfather’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, we made many preparation. Early in the morning, my parents and I set about for the department store to find a gift for Grandpa. We choose very carefully and purchased a warm sweater finally. To show my love for my grandpa, I made a birthday cake in the help of my mother. In the evening, we got together to celebrate his birthday. With candles lighting, we sang happy birthday loud , clapped. After making a wish, I blew out the candles. Then we took picture of the whole family to record the happily moment. When I saw tears in the Grandpa’s eyes, I was filled with a feeling of happiness in my heart.
答案:Last Friday was my grandfather’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, we made many preparation. Early in the morning, my parents and I set about for the department store to preparations off find a gift for Grandpa. We choose very carefully and purchased a warm sweater finally. To chose show my love for my grandpa, I made a birthday cake in the help of my mother. In the with evening, we got together to celebrate his birthday. With candles lighting, we sang happy lit/lighted birthday loud , clapped. After making a wish, I blew out the candles. Then we took clapping he ∧picture of the whole family to record the happily moment. When I saw tears in the a happy Grandpa’s eyes, I was filled with a feeling of happiness in my heart.