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A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn’t have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi?”
Enter for a chance to win a Montana adventure
Imagine yourself hiking on the same route that Lewis and Clark once explored, fly fishing and whitewater rafting (激浪漂流) in beautiful lakes and rivers, learning how to speak Blackfeet, digging for ancient dinosaur remains, and standing at the edge of a 6,000-year-old glacier (冰川) in Glacier National Park. You have the chance to do all of this and much more with the National Geographic Kids Hands-On Explorer Challenge Expedition Team. The Hands-On Explorer Challenge is heading west in 2016 to Montana.
HIKE!
Montana is home to many species of plants and animals. Follow in the footsteps of legendary explorers and get a close-up view of waterfalls, wildflowers, and wildlife.
DIG!
Some of the most important dinosaur discoveries have been found in Montana. You’ll discover treasures yourself as you dig for ancient dinosaur remains in Montana’s High Plains.
CULTURE!
Montana has eleven Native American tribes (部落)―each one filled with a unique heritage (遗产) and lots of rich traditions. View the world as they see it through their dances, songs, food, games, and languages.
HOW TO ENTER
1. Write an original, personal essay in English of no more than 300 words telling us how you explore your world and what it is about exploration that inspires and excites you.
2. Take a photograph of what, where, or how you explored the subject of your essay.
3. Enter by January 7, 2016. Open to kids who will be ages 9—14 as of July 1, 2016.
4. Send your entry (参赛) form, essay, and photo (as described in the Official Rules) to: NG Kids Hands-On Explorer Challenge, National Geographic Kids magazine /CDH, 1145 17th Street NW, Washington, DC 20036. FOR MORE INFORMATION, GO TO KIDS. NATIONALGEOGRAPHIC. COM/KIDS/CONTESTS/EXPLORER - TRIP-2016.
21. What is true about Montana?
A. It is home to many species of plants and animals.
B. It is Lewis and Clark’s hometown.
C. Its Native American tribes share the same culture.
D. It has many elephant discoveries.
22. If you want to enter the contest, you must ______.
A. be over 14 years old B. send a photo with your essay
C. have rich exploration experience D. write an English article over 300 words
23. What is the purpose of the passage?
A. To provide travel information. B. To describe Montana’s scenery.
C. To announce a kid competition. D. To suggest some outdoor activities.
Instagram(抓拍神器)is a game.Getting likes and followers is no easy task.My sister routinely breaks 150 likes on Instagram,no sweat,because she just gets it.36 Here’s what to do and,more important,what not to do.
1. 37
You can’t post photos optionally.Think of it like stealing grapes at the grocery store when a clerk isn’t watching.So when DO you actually post? Sunday evening is“prime time”for likes, because“everyone is bored and not doing homework.”I guess that applies to the real world too!
When not to post? Mornings! The likes are“strange and sporadic(零散的).”
2.Also,don’t post too much.
I don’t care how much you’re feeling your look. 38 This isn’t a buffet:we want a very small piece of your life.Remember,“You can’t give the people too much or they will pass their eye over it quickly.”If you’re posting three to four times a week,others may“reevaluate your life”.I see no lies!!!
3.But if it is a big week in your life,feel free to post more than usual.
Of course,there’s always the exception to the rule. 39 The social media shouldn’t punish you for having a lot going on! Just remember to take it easy after.
4.40
a.Be“natural and fun”.
b.Selfies are“not to be taken seriously”.
c.“Selfies should only be when you have a good one.”
A.Selfies have strict rules.
B.Wait a while before Selfies again.
C.Timing is everything.
D.No one needs to see eight pictures from your date night out.
E.After all,Instagram was meant to record important moments in your life.
F.Just make sure you post afterwards and let the people want more.
G.Thankfully she was able to take time out of her busy schedule and break down the science of Instagram for us“old”folk.
Urbanization
Until relatively recently, the vast majority of human beings lived and died without ever seeing a cit. The firs city was probably founded no more than 5,500 years ago. 36 In fact, nearly everyone lived on farms or in tiny rural villages. It was not until the 20th century that Great Britain became the first urban society in history-a society in which the majority of people live in cities and do not farm for a living.
Britain was only the beginning. 37 The process of urbanization--the migration of people from the countryside to the city--was the result of modernization, which has rapidly transformed how people live and where they live.
In 1990, fewer than 40% of Americans lived in urban areas. Today, over 82% of Americans live in cities, Only about 2% live on farms. 38
Large cities were impossible until agriculture became industrialized. Even in advanced agricultural societies, it took about ninety-five people on farms to feed five people in cities. 39 Until modem times, those living in cities were mainly the ruling elite(精英)and the servants, laborers and professionals who served them Cities survived by taxing farmers and were limited in size by the amount of surplus food that the rural population produced and by the ability to move this surplus from farm to city.
Over the past two centuries,the Industrial Revolution has broken this balance between the city and the country. 40 Today,instead of needing ninety-five farmers to feed five city people, one American farmer is able to feed more than a hundred non-farmers.
A.That kept cities very small.
B.The rest live in small towns.
C.The effects of urban living on people should be considered.
D.Soon many other industrial nations become urban societies.
E.But even 200 years ago,only a few people could live in cities.
F.Modernization drew people to the cities and made farmers more productive.
G.Modern cities have destroyed social relations and the health of human beings.
Longer Lives for Wild Elephants
Most people think of zoos as safe places for animals, where struggles such as difficulty finding food and avoiding predators don't exist. Without such problems, animals in zoos should live to a ripe old age.
But that may not be true for the largest land animals on Earth. Scientists have known that elephants in zoos often suffer from poor health. They develop diseases, joint problems and behavior changes. Sometimes, they even become unable to have babies.
To learn more about how captivity(监禁) affects elephants, a team of international scientists compared the life spans of female elephants born in zoos with female elephants living outdoors in their native lands. Zoos keep detailed records of all the animals in their care, documenting factors such as birth dates, illnesses, weight and death. These records made it possible for the researchers to analyze 40 years of data on 800 African and Asian elephants in zoos across Europe. The scientists compared the life spans of the zoo-born elephants with the life spans of thousands of female wild elephants in Africa and Asian elephants that work in logging camps(伐木场), over approximately the same time period.
The team found that female African elephants born in zoos lived an average of 16.9 years. Their wild counterparts who died of natural causes lived an average of 56 years——more than three times as long. Female Asian elephants followed a similar pattern. In zoos, they lived 18.9 years, while those in the logging camps lived 41.7 years.
Scientists don't yet know why wild elephants seem to live so much better than their zoo-raised counterparts. Georgia Mason, a biologist at the University of Guelph in Canada who led the study, thinks stress and obesity(肥胖) may be to blame. Zoo elephants don't get the same kind of exercise they would in the wild, and most are very fat. Elephant social lives are also much different in zoos than in the wild, where they live in large herds and family groups.
Another finding from the study showed that Asian elephants born in zoos were more likely to die early than Asian elephants captured in the wild and brought to zoos. Mason suggests stress in the mothers in zoos might cause them to have babies that are less likely to survive.
The study raises some questions about acquiring more elephants to keep in zoos. While some threatened and endangered species living in zoos reproduce successfully and maintain healthy populations, that doesn't appear to be the case with elephants.
72. According to the first two paragraphs, unlike other zoo animals, zoo elephants _______ .
A. have difficulty eating food. B. 1ive to a ripe old age.
C. are not afraid of predators. D. develop health problems.
73. Which of the following about the international scientists' research on the life spans of elephants is NOT true? (See paragraph 3)?
A. They compared zoo elephants with wild elephants.
B. They kept detailed records of all the elephants in their care.
C. They analyzed the records of the elephants kept in zoos.
D. The zoo-born elephants they studied are kept in European zoos.
74. What do the scientists find in their research?
A. Female elephants live longer than male elephants.
B. Female zoo elephants live longer than their wild counterparts.
C. Female zoo elephants die much earlier than their wild counterparts.
D. Elephants in zoos and those in the wild enjoy the same long life spans.
75. Which of the following does the author suggest in the last paragraph?
A. It may not be a wise policy to keep elephants in the zoo.
B. Elephants are no longer an endangered species.
C. Zoo-born elephants should be looked after more carefully.
D. Zoos should keep more animals except elephants.
The rising costs of health care have become a problem for many countries in the world. To deal with this problem, it is recommended that a big part of the government’s health budget(预算)be used for health education and disease prevention instead of treatment. Actually, many kinds of diseases are preventable in many ways and preventing a disease is usually much cheaper than treating it. For example, people could avoid catching a cold if they dressed warmly when the weather starts getting cold. But many people get sick because they fail to do so, and have to spend money seeing a doctor.
Daily habits like eating more healthy food would have kept millions of families from becoming bankrupt if the patients had taken measures for early prevention. For example, keeping a balanced diet, such as not consuming too much animal fat and insuring a steady intake of vegetables and fruits, seems to be quite important.
One very effective and costless way of prevention is regular exercise, which is necessary for a healthy mind and body. Regular exercise, such as running, walking, and playing sports is a good way to make people feel better or reduce stress.
In addition, health education plays a key role in improving people’s health. By giving people more information about health, countries could help people understand the importance of disease prevention and ways to achieve it. For example, knowing one’s family medical history is an effective way to help keep healthy. Information about health problems among close relatives will make them aware of what they should do to prevent certain diseases through lifestyle changes, which will work before it is too late.
Hinderer, stressing disease prevention does not mean medical treatment is unimportant. After all, prevention and treatment are just two different means toward the same effect. In conclusion, we could save money on health care and treat patients more successfully if our country spends more money on health prevention and education.
32.What’s the best title of the passage?
A. Prevention or Education?
B. Prevention or Treatment?
C. Health or Illness?
D. Exercise or Illness?
33.Which of the following can replace the underlined word “bankrupt”?
A. Unable to be cured.
B. Unable to pay one’s debts.
C. Stronger than ever before.
D. More successful than ever before.
34.We learn from the passage that .
A. dressing warmly can prevent diseases
B. a balanced diet is cheaper than regular exercise
C. It’s better to have more health education.
D. the government’s health budget should be increased
35.Which of the following shows the structure of the passage?

CP(Central Point) P(Point) S(Sub—point次要点) C(Conclusion)
----When can we go to visit you?
---- Anytime you feel like ______.
A. one B. it C. that D. so
Lily was heading down the sidewalk towards her subway stop in Washington. She had a lot to do at work. But as she hurried down the 16 , she started to feel warm. By the time she 17 to the platform. Lily felt sick – maybe it hadn’t been a 18 idea to give blood the night before, she thought. She leaned 19 against a post close to the tracks.
Several metres away, John and his girlfriend Mary, found a 20 close to where the front of the train would stop. Suddenly he 21 the scream, followed by someone yelling. “Oh, my God she 22 in!” John didn’t hesitate. Taking off and 23 the bag to his friend, he 24 down to the tracks and ran some 12 metres towards the body lying facedown on the 25 . By the time John reached Lily, he could “ 26 vibration(震动)on the tracks and see the light 27 the tunnel,” he remembers. “The train was maybe 20 seconds from the station.”
28 ,a former high school wrestler who trains t a gym to stay in shape, 29 Lily under her ampits ,(腋窝). She was deadweight. “It was 30 to lift her. She was just our,” he says. But he managed to raise her 1.2 meters to the 31 so that by standers could grab her arms and drag her away from the edge. As the train closed in, John had to 32 himself onto the platform. He did so just seconds before the t rain passed by him and came to a stop.
When Lily woke up again, she felt herself being 33 along the ground, and saw someone else around her. Police and fire officials soon arrived and Lily 34 a scries of operations on her face 35 fortunately she didn’t lose her life.
16.A.stairs B.windows C.platform D.exit
17.A.moved B.arrived C.got D.reached
18.A.had B.good C.common D.special
19.A.easily B.stably C.delightedly D.heavily
20.A.spot B.poster C.door D.restroom
21.A.learned B.noticed C.heard D.saw
22.A.ran B.looked C.took D.feel
23.A.receiving B.throwing C.breaking D.losing
24.A.jumped B.walked C.went D.sat
25.A.paths B.tracks C.trains D.seats
26.A.change B.watch C.feel D.realize
27.A.going into B.making into C.pulling into D.coming into
28.A.Lily B.Joe C.Mary D.John
29.A.grabbed B.pushed C.woke D.called
30.A.hard B.easy C.timely D.possible
31.A.train B.platform C.station D.shop
32.A.take B.convince C.tell D.lift
33.A.beaten B.stolen C.pulled D.worried
34.A.needed B.required C.asked D.ordered
35.A.and B.or C.but D.so
— Roderick had an accident yesterday.
— How come? He _______ very carefully.
A.drove B.drives C.had driven D.has driven
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Hi Eva,
Sorry that I haven’t been in the touch for a while. But I catch a cold last week, and I’ve been in bed for four day. I’m feeling better today. Lucky my classes won’t start till next week.
I have good news. I’m going to a conference in you town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you recommend a hotel where is in the centre of town? It needs to be somewhere not too expensive because the tight budget. I’ll have a freely half-day for sightseeing. Do you think you can showed me around?
Looking forward to hear from you soon
Chris
--- I’m going to have lunch. Do you mind talking about your plan ____ lunch?
---All right. I’ll wait here in the office.
A. after B. before C. over D. until
To be great, you must be smart, confident, and, _______,honest.
A. therefore B. above all
C. however D. after all
Here is an astonishing and significant fact: Mental work alone can’t make us tired. It sounds absurd. But years ago, scientists tried to find out how long the human brain could labor without reaching a stage of fatigue (tiredness). To the amazement of these scientists, they discovered that blood passing through the brain, when it is active, shows no fatigue at all! If we took a drop of blood from a day laborer, we would find it full of fatigue toxins (毒素) and fatigue products. But if we took blood from the brain of an Albert Einstein, it would show no fatigue toxins at the end of the day.
So far as the brain is concerned, it can work as well and swiftly at the end of eight or even twelve hours of effort as at the beginning. The brain is totally tireless. So what makes us tired?
Some scientists declare that most of our fatigue comes from our mental and emotional attitudes. One of England’s most outstanding scientists, J.A. Hadfield, says, “The greater part of the fatigue from which we suffer is of mental origin. In fact, fatigue of purely physical origin is rare.” Dr. Brill, a famous American scientist, goes even further. He declares, “One hundred percent of the fatigue of sitting worker in good health is due to emotional problems.”
What kinds of emotions make sitting workers tired? Joy? Satisfaction? No! A feeling of being bored, anger, anxiety, tenseness, worry, a feeling of not being appreciated—those are the emotions that tire sitting workers. Hard work by itself seldom causes fatigue. We get tired because our emotions produce nervousness in the body.
25. What surprised the scientists a few years ago?
A. Fatigue toxins could hardly be found in a laborer’s blood.
B. Albert Einstein didn’t feel worn after a day’s work.
C. The brain could work for many hours without fatigue.
D. A mental worker’s blood was filled with fatigue toxins.
26. According to the author, which of the following can make sitting workers tired?
A. Challenging mental work. B. Unpleasant emotions.
C. Endless tasks. D. Physical labor.
27. What’s the author’s attitude towards the scientists’ idea?
A. He agrees with them. B. He doubts them.
C. He argues against them. D. He hesitates to accept them.
28. We can infer from the passage that in order to stay energetic, sitting workers need to ________.
A. have some good food B. enjoy their work
C. exercise regularly D. discover fatigue toxins
假如你叫刘薇,今年六月份将从新华中学高三毕业,打算到美国加利福尼亚大学留学,现在请你根据下面的个人信息,用英语写一封信,申请留学。
姓名:刘薇
性别:女
出生年月:1994年6月
毕业学校:新华中学
学业:各门功课优秀
申请院校:加利福尼亚大学
申请专业:计算机科学
兴趣爱好:网络和英语
电子信箱:liuwei94@sina.com
注意:
3. 信件必须包括以上内容,不能逐句翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 词数:120左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:加利福尼亚大学:the University of California
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance for my further study in computer science in your university.
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Yours sincerely
My father had always been an alert observer of human character. Within seconds of meeting someone, he could sum up their strengths and weaknesses. It was always a challenge to see if any of my boyfriends could pass Dad’s test. None did. Dad was always right -- they didn’t pass my test either. After Dad died, I wondered how I’d figure it out on my own.
That’s when Jack arrived on the scene. He was different from any other guy I’d dated. He could sit for hours on the piano bench with my mother, discussing some composers. My brother Rick loudly announced that Jack wasn’t a turkey like the other guys I’d brought home. Jack passed my family’s test. But what about Dad’s?
Then came my mother’s birthday. The day he was supposed to drive, I got a call. “Don’t worry,” he said, “but I’ve been in an accident. I’m fine, but I need you to pick me up.”
When I got there, we rushed to a flower shop for something for Mom. “How about gardenias?” Jack said, pointing at a beautiful white corsage(胸花). The florist put the corsage in a box.
The entire ride, Jack was unusually quiet. “Are you all right?” I asked. “I’ve been doing a lot of thinking,” he said. “I might be moving.” Moving? Then he added, “Moving in with you.” I nearly put the car on the sidewalk. “What?” I asked. “I think we should get married,” he said. He told me he’d planned his proposal(求婚) in a fancy restaurant, but after the accident, he decided to do it right away.
“Yes,” I whispered. We both sat dumbfounded, tears running down our cheeks. I’d never known such a tender moment. If only Dad were here to give his final approval.
“Oh, let’s just go inside.” Jack laughed. My mother opened the door. “Happy birthday!” We shouted. Jack handed
the box to her. She opened it up. Suddenly, her eyes were filled with tears. “Mom, what’s wrong?” I asked. “I’m sorry,” she said, wiping her eyes. “This is only the second gardenia corsage I’ve ever received. I was given one years ago, long before you kids were born.” “From whom?” I asked. “Your father,” Mom said. “He gave me one right before we were engaged.” My eyes locked on Jack’s as I blinked away(眨掉) tears. Dad’s test? I knew Jack had
passed.
39. What can we learn about Jack from Paragraph 2?
A. Jack got the family’s approval except Rick’s. B. Jack was different from any other boy.
C. Jack was getting on well with Mother. D. Jack knew a lot about piano.
40. Why did Jack keep quiet during the ride to the writer’s house?
A. Because he was not a talkative person.
B. Because he was still thinking of the accident.
C. Because he was not feeling all right after the accident.
D. Because he was thinking of planning a proposal to the writer.
41. What should be the writer’s feeling when she heard that Jack talked about marriage?
A. surprised B. worried C. pleased D. disappointed
42. The writer’s mother cried because __________
___.
A. Her daughter found her life partner at last.
B. She had never received such a beautiful gift.
C. The gift reminded her of the gardenia corsage her husband gave her.
D. The gardenia corsage Jack gave her was too expensive and beautiful.
________I was in trouble, he would come to help me out.
A. Every time B. The first time C. for the first time D. Next time
A huge fire has engulfed a 63-storey hotel in central Dubai ahead of a New Year’s Eve firework display. ___33_____ the blaze at the Address hotel, the display at the nearby Burj Khalifa, the tallest building in the world, started as planned at midnight.
Officials say the fire ___34_____ largely under control and 16 people suffered mostly minor injures. It is unclear ___35_____ caused the blaze, which broke out as large crowds had gathered to ring in the New Year. People were asked to leave the area around the Address Downtown Hotel, which was evacuated.
As I watched the flames engulf the massive building, I knew right away it was the Address Hotel in Dubai’s downtown district that overlooks Burj Khalifa. I also knew that it was fully booked five years in advance. There were also thousands of people in the streets below and in the adjacent buildings, all waiting to view the highly anticipated New Year’s Eve fireworks display, ___36_____ them my youngest sister. After checking on my sister, I hastily decided to head out to downtown Dubai in the hope of seeing the scene on the ground for myself.
As I approached downtown, I realized that the normally brightly illuminated Burj Khalifa was only half-lit and I could barely see the imposing structure amid the black smoke from the Address Hotel. I did not expect to spend the next four hours right outside the downtown area, in one of the worst traffic jams I have ever encountered. ___37_____ the clock struck midnight, I resigned myself to ringing in the New Year among thousands of strangers, all gazing out of our cars towards Burj Khalifa’s spectacular fireworks display, alongside a burning hotel.
It started on the 20th floor, officials said, and had not spread inside the building, they claimed.
14 people were believed to ___38_____ minor injuries, one moderate injuries and there was one "heart attack case" due to "overcrowding and smoke".
Irish singer Anita Williams, who ___39_____ at the hotel when the fire began, told the BBC that people left in a "stampede".
"We left everything. There was debris falling down. It [the fire] just shot up through the entire hotel."Everybody was screaming, everybody was running... I thought: ’This is ___40_____ film’."
I wonder ________ the equipment will be available in ten days.
A. that B. when C. whether D. where
When was the last time you read a book, or a magazine article? If you’re one of the people who don’t make a habit of reading regularly, you might be missing out: reading has a significant number of 41 .
First, studies have shown that staying 42 active can slow the 43 of Alzheimer’ (阿尔兹海默症). Just like any other muscle in the body, the brain 44 exercise to keep it strong and healthy. Doing puzzles and playing 45 such as chess have also been found to be helpful.
Second, no matter how much stress you have at work, in your personal relationships, or 46 problems 47 in daily life, it all just 48 away when you are absorbed 49 a great story. A well-written novel can transport you to other fields, while an interesting article will distract you from the problems 50 , letting pressure go away and 51 you to relax.
Third, everything you read fills your head 52 new information, and you 53__ know when it might come in handy. The 54 knowledge you have, the better-equipped you are to deal with any 55 you’ll ever face. Remember: 56 you might lose everything else—your job, your possessions, your money, 57 your health—knowledge can never be taken 58 you.
At last, when you read a book, all of your attention is 59 the story and you can immerse (使专心于)yourself in every detail you’re reading. Try reading for 15-20 minutes 60 work, and you’ll be surprised at how much more focused you are once you get to the office.
41. A. reasons B. types C. ways D. benefits
42. A. normally B. physically C. mentally D. usually
43. A. improvement B. suffering C. progress D. pain
44. A. requires B. asks C. adopts D. designs
45. A. sports B. toys C. games D. music
46. A. another B. the other C. others D. other
47. A. happened B. faced C. seen D. occurred
48. A. gives B goes C passes D puts
49. A. to B. in C. by D. from
50. A. before hand B. by hand C. at hand D. within hand
51. A. demanding B. allowing C. leading D. encouraging
52. A. of B. with C. for D. by
53. A. already B. ever C. still D. never
54. A. much B. many C. more D. most
55. A. challenge B. chance C. person D. occasion
56. A. because B. since C. although D. therefore
57. A. still B. just C. even D. though
58. A. from B. to C. into D. out
59. A. relied on B. focused on C. depended on D. taken on
60. A. before B. after C. during D. off
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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) 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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Last Sunday, the students of our class made a bike trip to a small town by the Sand Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we visited some place of interest. In noon, we had a picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautiful scenery and we took plenty of photos there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, some row boats on the water, but others flew kites. We both had a wonderful time. It was a pleasant trip for us, during which the boys were offered the girls so much help. That we have learned from the trip is to help, understand and sharing with others. In word, we have got quite a lot from it.