From: Jeff Whitmore <JeffW@xxx.com>
To: Kenji Okamoto <okamoto@xxx.com>
Date: January 10, 2015
Subject: Request for advice
Dear Mr. Okamoto.
My name is Jeff Whitmore,and my daughter, Anna, is one of your students. As you know, we just moved back to Japan six months ago after living in Chicago for three years. Although she had attended school in Japan before we went to Chicago, it`s Anna`s first year at a Japanese junior high school. My wife and I are a little worried about her, and were hoping that it would be okay to ask you for advice.
She`s getting good grades and likes her classes and teachers. In particular,she has a pen- chant for numbers and loves her math class. She often talks about your fun English class, too. However, after almost half a year, it doesn`t seem like she`s made any friends. Last week. She said that she usually reads by herself during breaks between classes while other girls are hanging out and chatting. Anna also mentioned that she walks to school alone every day. This is very different from how she was in the US.
I understand that it can take time to make friends at a new school, but I still have concerns that she may be a bit isolated. I think it would be better for her to develop a group of good friends as soon as possible. Even just one close friend would be a good first step. I've never contacted one of my daughter's homeroom teachers before and hope that l`m not bothering you. I just thought that you might know more about her life at school. If you have any ideas about how she can make more personal connections, I would be happy to hear them.
Sincerely,
JeffWhitmore
From:Kenji Okamoto<okamoto@----.com>
To:Jeff Whitmore <JeffW@----.com>
Date:January 11,2015
Subject: Re: Request for advice
Dear Mr. Whitmore,
It' always nice to hear from a parent of one of my students, and I`ll be happy to help you if I can.I`ve talked with Anna one -on-one on several occasions and find her to be a delightful person who is confident and friendly.Actually, I`m surprised to hear about your concerns as she seems to get along well with other students in the class. Probably, she`ll soon form close friendships, but I do have a few ideas for you to consider that may help her to this.
First, our school has many different. clubs that offer good environments for developing friendships. I know that she enjoys music, so perhaps she would like to join the chorus. If she prefers sports, we have a volleyball club, a soccer club, and oven a karate club. Also, I`m currently organizing a new English club. We will meet once a week to talk and to enjoy music and movies in English. If Anna joins or even takes a leadership role, she can connect with other students who have a shared interest--English. I know of one Japanese student from another class who has spent time in New Zealand and is planning to participate. They may find a lot in common.
Another approach is to create social situations where she can be the center of attention. Anna told me you often had barbecue parties in your garden in the US. If it's possible, you could have an American-style barbecue party and invite some of the students in her class. I`m sure it would be an exciting experience for them. Possibly, Anna would be more herself at home and they would get to know her better.
From my experience, I honestly think you have nothing to worry about and feel confident she will establish friendships sooner or later on her own.But,if you feel that any of my ideas will help, please let me know, and we can consider the next step.
Best regards,
Kenji Okamoto
21. What was Anna probably like at her school in Chicago?
A. She liked to be alone in the classroom.
B. She showed off her Japanese ability.
C. She spent a lot of time with friends.
D. She was jealous of the other students.
22. The phrase has a penchant for in the second paragraph of Mr. Whitmore`s email is closest in meaning to
A. is collecting B. is exchanging
C. is fond of D. is unsure about
23. Which of the following statements is true according to the information in the email messages?
A. Anna does not talk about her school life with her parents at home.
B. Anna prefers her Japanese language class to her English class.
C. Mr. Whitmore is concerned about Anna`s academic performance.
D. This is the first email message Mr. Whitmore has sent Mr. Okamoto.
24. Unlike Mr. Whitmore, Mr. Okamoto thinks that Anna .
A. is isolated from other students in her class
B. spends a lot of time reading in school
C. will have trouble getting good grades
D. will make friends without any special help
25. Which of the following is NOT one of Mr. Okamoto`s suggestions for Mr. Whitmore?
A. Take Anna on a trip to New Zealand.
B. Invite Anna's classmates to an event.
C. Let Anna participate in the English club.
D. Have Anna join a sports or music club.
Two of the saddest words in the English language are “if only”. I live my life with the goal of never having to say those words, because they convey regret, lost opportunities, mistakes, and disappointment.
My father is famous in our family for saying, “Take the extra minute to do it right.” I always try to live by the “extra minute” rule. When my children were young and likely to cause accidents, I always thought about what I could do to avoid an “if only” moment, whether it was something minor like moving a cup full of hot coffee away from the edge of a counter, or something that required a little more work such as taping padding (衬垫) onto the sharp corners of a glass coffee table.
I don’t only avoid those “i
f only” moments when it comes to safety. It’s equally important to avoid “if only” in our personal relationships. We all know people who lost a loved one and regretted that they had foregone an opportunity to say “I love you” or “I forgive you.” When my father announced he was going to the eye doctor across from my office on Good Friday, I told him that it was a holiday for my company and I wouldn’t be here. But then I thought about the fact that he’s 84 years old and I realized that I shouldn’t give up an opportunity to see him. I called him and told him I had decided to go to work on my day off after all.
I know there will still be occasions when I have to say “if only” about something, but my life is definitely better because of my policy of doing everything possible to avoid that eventuality. And even though it takes an extra minute to do something right, or it occasionally takes an hour
or two in my busy schedule to make a personal co
nnection, I know that I’m doing the right thing. I’m buying myself peace of mind and that’s the best kind of insurance for my emotional well-being.
24.Which of the following is an example of the “extra minute” rule?
A. Start the car the moment everyone is seated.
B. Leave the room for a minute with the iron working.
C. Wait for an extra minute so that the steak tastes better.
D. Move an object out of the way before it trips someone.
25.The author decided to go to her office on Good Friday to ______.
A. keep her appointment with the eye doctor
B. meet her father who was already an old man
C. join in the holiday celebration of the company
D. finish her work before the deadline approached
26.The underlined word “foregone” in Paragraph 3 is closest in meaning to ______.
A. avoided B. lacked C. abandoned D. took
27.What is the best title for the passage?
A
. The Emotional Well-being
B. The Two Saddest Words
C. The Most Useful Rule
D. The Peace of Mind
We are all called upon to make a speech at some point in life, but most of us don’t do a very good job. 16
So, you have to give a speech and you are terrified. You get nervous, you forget what you want to say, you stumble over words, you talk too long, and you bore your audience. Later you think, “Thank Goodness, it’s over. I’m just not good at public speaking. I hope I never have to do that again.”
Cheer up! 17 Here are some simple steps to take the pain out of speech making. Ask yourself the purpose of your speech. What is the occasion? Why are you speaking? Then, gather as many facts as you can on your subject. Spend plenty of your time doing your research. Then spend plenty of your time organizing your material so that your speech is clear and easy to follow. Use as many examples as possible, and use pictures, charts, and graphs if they help you make your points more clearly. 18 Don’t talk over their heads, and don’t talk down to them. Treat your audience with respect. They will appreciate your thoughtfulness.
Just remember: Be prepared. Know your subject, your audience, and the occasion. Be brief. 19 And be yourself. Let your personality come through so that you make person-to-person contact with your audience.
If you follow these simple steps, you will see that you don’t have to be afraid of public speaking. In fact, you may find the experience so enjoyable that you volunteer to make more speeches! You’re not convinced yet? 20
A. Take several deep breaths before your speech.
B. It doesn’t have to be that bad.
C. Say what you have to say and then stop.
D. This article gives some advice on how to give good speech.
E. Never forget your audience.
F. Don’t say what you aren’t familiar with.
G. Give it a try and see what happens.
A new survey released by Yale University finds that Americans trust scientists most when ______ comes to information on climate change.
A. that B. this C. it D. there
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
As 1 (know) to us all, 2 the improvement of people’s living standards, cars 3 (become)a popular means of transport, 4 (bring) great convenience to our life. 5 , they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I 6 (concern) , bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For 7 ,bicycles are 8 (environment) friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
9 , let’s take the 10 (responsible) to build up a carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!
A few months ago, I was picking up the children at school. Emily, another mother that I knew well, rushed up to me. She was full of __41_.
“Do you know _42_ you and I are?” she asked. _43__ I could answer, she gave out the reason for her question. She had just returned from renewing her driver’s license at a government office. The woman __44__ desk asked her what her “occupation” was. Emily hesitated, __45__ how to answer it. “What I mean is,” explained the woman, “do you have a job, or are you just a ...?” “Of course I have a job,” answered Emily. “I’m a (an) __46__.” “We don’t __47_ ‘mother’ as an occupation ... ‘housewife’ covers it,” she said.
I forgot all about her story __48__ one day I found myself in the same situation. This time it was at our own Town Hall. The clerk was a woman.
“And what is your occupation?” she asked. What __49__ me say it, I do not know. The words simply jumped out. “I’m ... a (an) ___50___ in the field of Child Development and Human Relations.”
The clerk stopped, her ball-point pen ___51__ in mid-air. She looked up __52__ she had not heard right. I repeated the title slowly.
“Might I ask,” said the clerk with new interest, “just what you do in your ___53_?” Coolly, I heard myself __54__, “I have a continuing program of research in the
laboratory and in the field. I’m working for my masters (the whole family) and already have __55_ credits (令人增光的人或事物) (all daughters). I often work 14 hours a day (24 is more like it). The job is more challenging than most jobs and the __56__ are in satisfaction rather than just money.”
There was an increasing note of __57__ in the clerk’s voice as she __58__ in the form. As I drove into our driveway(私家车道), I was __59_ by my lab assistants — ages 13, 7, and 3. Inside the house I could hear our new experimental model (six months) in the child-development program.
I felt successful. Motherhood...what a great __60_.
41. A. surprise B. anxiety C. anger D. excitement
42. A. who B. what C. how D. why
43. A. When B. As C. Before D. Since
44. A. at B. after C. by D. around
45. A. nervous B. sure C. anxious D. uncertain
46. A. mother B. worker C. teacher D. doctor
47. A. think B. list C. expect D. give
48. A. since B. unless C. until D. when
49. A. got B. caused C. permit D. made
50. A. researcher B. manager C. expert D. scholar
51. A. dropped B. floated C. frozen D. broke
52. A. so that B. even though C. as though D. because of
53. A. family B. subject C. study D. field
54. A. words B. reply C. shout D. whisper
55. A. two B. three C. four D. five
56. A. rewards B. awards C. profits D. benefits
57. A. interest B. respect C. doubt D fear
58. A. explained B. passed C. completed D. filled
59. A. accepted B. greeted C. recognized D. refused
60. A. person B. award C. career D. business
It was human errors, rather than the natural disaster, that ________ for the death of so many innocent people in the landslide at an industrial park in Shenzhen.
A. is blamed B. is to blame C. are blamed D. are to blame
Even though it doesn’t feel like a fairy tale, I still feel like I am living in a cartoon with him every day _______ we can lie down and live a carefree life.
A. where B. which C. when D. whom
American real estate(房地产)tycoon Donald Trump, whose election as US president surprised many around the world, has been unsurprisingly named Time magazine’s “Peron of the Year” for 2016.
Trump said while responding to the news, “It means a lot, especially me growing up reading Time magazine. And it’s a very important magazine, and I’ve been lucky enough to be on the cover many times this year-and last year. But I consider this a very, very great honor.”
Trump has long been obsessed with having his face on the cover of magazines, something that happened more and more often as he won early polls, then Republican primaries, then the nomination(提名), then the presidency. Trump keeps piles of these magazines in his office and with this mindset, Time’s “Person of the Year” became Trump’s long-cherished wish.
Although the magazine featured Trump several times on its cover, it passed on naming him “Person of the Year” for 2015. Instead, it selected German Chancellor Angela Merkel, whom the magazine credited with opening her nation’s border to hundreds of thousands of refugees(难民)and managing Europe’s debt crisis. Trump did not take that news well. “I told you @ TIME Magazine would never pick me as ‘Person of the Year’ in spite of being the big favorite. They picked the person who is ruining Germany,” he said on Twitter soon after the news was announced.
Time managing editor Nancy Gibbs said that the decision in 2016 was easy. This title goes to a newsmaker who has influenced events for better or for worse. “When have we ever seen a single individual who has so defied(违背)expectations…beaten not one but two political parties on the way to winning an election… I don’t think that we have ever seen one person, operating in such an unconventional way, have an impact on the events of the year quite like this,” Gibbs said.
24. What do Trump’s words suggest in Paragraph?
A. Luck is on his side. B. He deserves the award.
C. He feels proud of the award D. Time has a good effect on him.
25. Which is truth according to the article?
A. Trump is afraid to be famous.
B. Trump is angry about Time magazine.
C. Trump is addicted to having his face on the cover of magazines.
D. Trump is addicted to having his face on the cover of magazines.
26. What can we infer from Paragraph 4?
A. Merkel ruined Germany. B. Merkel was “Person of the Year” for 2015.
C. Trump thought well of Merkel. D. Trump won “Person of the Year” twice.
27. Why was Trump elected as Time’s “Person of the Year” for 2016?
A. He’s been on its cover many times. B. He is the newly elected president.
C. He is the favorite of the magazine. D. He was highly influential in the year.
On one of her trips to New York several years ago, Eudora Welty decided to take a couple of New York friends out to dinner. They settled in at a comfortable East Side cafe and within minutes, another customer was approaching their table.
“Hey, aren’t you from Mississippi?” the elegant, white-haired writer remembered being asked by the stranger. “I’m from Mississippi too.”
Without a second thought, the woman joined the Welty party. When her dinner partner showed up, she also pulled up a chair.
“They began telling me all the news of Mississippi,” Welty said. “I didn’t know what my New York friends were thinking.”
Taxis on a rainy New York night are rarer than sunshine. By the time the group got up to leave, it was pouring outside. Welty’s new friends immediately sent a waiter to find a cab. Heading back downtown toward her hotel, her big-city friends were amazed at the turn of events that had changed their Big Apple dinner into a Mississippi state reunion (团聚).
“My friends said: ‘Now we believe your stories,’” Welty added. “And I said: ‘Now you know. These are the people that make me write them.’”
Sitting on a sofa in her room, Welty, a slim figure in a simple gray dress, looked pleased with this explanation.
“I don’t make them up,” she said of the characters in her fiction these last 50 or so years. “I don’t have to.”
Beauticians, bartenders, piano players and people with purple hats, Welty’s people come from afternoons spent visiting with old friends, from walks through the streets of her native Jackson, Miss., from conversations overheard on a bus. It annoys Welty that, at 78, her left ear has now given out. Sometimes, sitting on a bus or a train, she hears only a fragment(片段) of a particularly interesting story.
28 What happened when Welty was with her friends at the cafe?
A. Two strangers joined her. B. Her childhood friends came in.
C. A heavy rain ruined the dinner. D. Some people held a party there.
29. The underlined word “them” in Paragraph 6 refers to Welty’s .
A. readers B. parties C. friends D. stories
30. What can we learn about the characters in Welty’s fiction?
A. They live in big cities. B. They are mostly women.
C. They come from real life. D. They are pleasure seekers.
I was caught in a traffic jam for over an hour, otherwise I ______ you waiting for such a long time.
A. will not keep B. have not kept C. had not kept D. would not have kept
A. apparently B. surprisingly C. spirituality D. tried E. poetry F. statement G. physical H. released I. lasting j. recorded K. instruments
When US musician Bob Dylan was announced as the winner of this year ‘s Nobel Prize for literature last month , many people took to social media to suggest that Leonard Cohen was the only other living songwriter who deserved the honor.
Sadly , on Nov 7 , the deep-voiced Canadian artist died at the age of 82.
Many tributes ( 称赞) were written for Cohen , who had just ____31____ his 14th album , You Want It Darker , on Oct 21. “ Leonard Cohen is as important today as he was in the 1960s ,” Canada ‘s Prime Minister Justin Trudeau said in a ____32____ . “ His ability to describe human emotion made him one of the most influential and _____33____musicians ever.”
Cohen’s most famous song , Hallenlujah , in which he compared ___34_____ love to a need for spiritual connection , has been ____35____ hundreds of times by different musicians since it was first released in 1984.
And Cohen’s song Bird on a Wire (1969) could be considered a perfect epitaph (墓志铭) that he wrote for himself. As the song’s first line goes , “ Like a bird on a wire , like a drunk in midmight choir , I have ___36_____in my way to be free .”
“ Cohen writes words that explain what it means to be human . I ‘ve read___37_____that has as much beauty as Cohen’s work , but in the world of music , Cohen is a rarity ,” US singer Jennifer Warnes told the Ausin American-Statesman newspaper . ‘ He describes things that go on inside a heart and what it feels like to be here.”
Along with his ____38___, Cohen’s dry , deep voice also helped his popularity . In 2006 he spoke with the NPR radio station about how he got his interesting voice ----____39____it was “500 tons of whiskey and a million cigarettes.”
But he never forgot to work on the _____40_____that made up his songs , even though he was most famous for his lyrics and voice.
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“An Afternoon with Lele”为题,给校刊“英语园地”写一篇英文稿件,介绍你上周三照顾邻居家孩子乐乐的过程。
注意:词数不少于60。

Habits Of Highly Successful Students
Never Over-Study
When you spend too much time studying you will quickly lose focus and the time spent in studying will become ‘junk time’. You think you're studying but you're just sitting there re-reading the same sentence about 100 times and you're not getting anywhere. Instead, take regular breaks. 71 Besides, it will give your mind some time to take in what you have been doing.
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Top students don't just randomly(随意地)sit down and complete work. They actually plan what they are going to do: They actually plan the time they will study and they set goals for what will be achieved. If you want to be successful, do as successful people do. Set a plan and, set a goal and stick to it, which will create a routine and a routine is the first step towards developing a habit. 73
Front Up To The Toughest Work First
Many of us like to do the easy things first to build our confidence. That’s fair enough. The only challenge with this approach is that you use up your primary energy at the start of any study period and so if you are dealing with the easy parts with your primary energy your batteries will be low when it comes the time to deal with the hard part. So what happens then? 74 We all do it. We really shouldn't, though. So develop the habit of giving your primary energy to the hard tasks and completing the easy stuff last.
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Do we really have to explain this? Just turn them off for an hour, we promise the world will still be there when you log back in! Don't text your friends, don't chat while doing memory activities,don't make phone calls, just focus on what you're doing. Even if you focus on work' for 15 minutes followed by 5 mins of chatting, it’s better than 30 minutes of work while also chatting! You get that right?
A. Taking breaks can make you get everywhere.
B. You get tired and impatient and just give up.
C. Positive habits decide future success.
D. Plan Your Study
E. Taking breaks will make you energetic again and refresh your mind.
F. Get Off Social Networking Sites And Turn Off The Phone
G. Achieve Your Goal
I remember when I was growing up being painfully shy. I remember my first time standing in front of people speaking. It was ___41___; my knees were knocking ; my palms were sweating and I thought I was going to __42___. But I got through it at last and kind of enjoyed it. Later I regarded it as a good chance to practice my __43___talent. Now, after many years, the act of speaking in front of people brings me great __44____.
Part of life philosophy which allows us to __45___ healthily and creates happiness is how we look at __46___. They are in our life to create growth. Like the ___47___goes“A chain is only as strong as its weakest link.”We get rid of our weakness then we become ___48___. Challenges are given to us so that we can grow ___49___. The question is how we look at them. Looking at the challenges is to see their ___50___ as positive. But many times when we are faced with a problem, we ___51___ it as negative. If we are___52___ in ourselves and see growth opportunities as creating ___53___ changes in our life, they can help us to become stronger, just as how I ___54___ the speech later.
We need to recognize challenges have their good functions that can ___55__ us. Once you learn to look upon challenges as opportunities to use a ___56___ perspective and test you, they’ll help you gain strength . They___57___ you good chances to grow healthily. Once you___58___ those challenges, they no longer stay in your life and they’ll disappear. Of course that doesn’t mean you make them disappear without ___59__,but the strength and ___60___ you gain are worth the effort.
41. A. unusual B. common C. uncomfortable D. normal
42. A. pass out B. move on C. run away D. turn away
43. A. story B. speech C. article D. work
44. A. joy B. value C. purpose D. dream
45. A. talk B. listen C. play D. grow
46. A. challenges B. fates C. success D. failure
47. A. word B. sentence C. saying D. example
48. A. stronger B. happier C. younger D. lovelier
49. A. faster B. better C. freer D. easier
50. A. reason B. outcome C. aim D. action
51. A. map B. find C. picture D. imagine
52. A. disappointed B. honest C. interested D. confident
53. A. slow B. unique C. common D. positive
54. A. notice B. suggest C. regard D. confirm
55. A. benefit B. push C. force D. attract
56. A. strange B. new C. true D. good
57. A. throw B. direct C. accord D. introduce
58. A. overtake B. overlie C. overlook D. overcome
59. A. emotion B. time C. result D. effort
60. A. spirit B. wisdom C. knowledge D. virtue
An opinion is _____ someone believes is true but has not been proved.
A. that B. what
C. which D. whether
Nowadays, there is a trend that more and more people spend their holidays in foreign countries. 36 So read our travel tips that are simple and practical, and you can always enjoy your travels.
On a business card, write down the emergency contact information and place it in your wallet. 37 Give your emergency contact a copy of your travel plan, a passport data page, and the visa information.
Give each piece of your luggage a unique look: tie a bright handkerchief to a handle or purchase a colored luggage tag. 38
If you don’t speak the local language, carry a brochure with the name and address of your destination. 39
To avoid being a target of crime, don’t wear eye-catching clothing: dress conservatively, and don’t wear or carry obvious signs of wealth (gold watches, expensive jewelry and etc.) and don’t carry more cash than necessary. 40
To make sure of a safe journey and avoid some unnecessary troubles when travelling in foreign countries, you could never be too careful.
A. Also, don’t accept packages from strangers.
B. Once your wallet is stolen, you can let them know.
C. Good preparations can always help you out as well.
D. You can show it to taxi drivers or when asking for directions.
E. It will be easier for you to keep track of your bag from a distance.
F. Of course everyone wants his travels to be trouble-free and enjoyable.
G. Include the name of anyone who should be contacted in an emergency.
Overwhelmed by more information than we can possibly hold in our heads, we're increasingly handing off the job of remembering to search engines and smart phones. Google is even reportedly working on eyeglasses that could one day recognize faces and supply details about whoever you're looking at. But new research shows that outsourcing our memory ─ and expecting that information will be continually and instantaneously available ─is changing our cognitive habits.
Research conducted by Betsy Sparrow, an assistant professor of psychology at Columbia
University, has identified three new realities about how we process information in the Internet age. First, her experiments showed that when we don't know the answer to a question, we now think about where we can find the nearest Web connection instead of the subject of the question itself. A second revelation is that when we expect to be able to find information again later on, we don't remember it as well as when we think it might become unavailable. And then there is the researchers' final observation: the expectation that we'll be able to locate information down the line leads us to form a memory not of the fact itself but of where we'll be able to find it.
But this handoff comes with a downside. Skills like critical thinking and analysis must develop in the context of facts: we need something to think and reason about, after all. And these facts can't be Googled as we go; they need to be stored in the original hard drive, our long-term memory. Especially in the case of children, “factual knowledge must precede skill,” says Daniel Willingham, a professor of psychology, at the University of Virginia ─ meaning that the days of drilling the multiplication table and memorizing the names of the Presidents aren't over quite yet. Adults, too, need to recruit a supply of stored knowledge in order to situate and evaluate new information they encounter. You can't Google context.
Last, there's the possibility, increasingly terrifying to contemplate, that our machines fail us. As Sparrow puts it, “The experience of losing our Internet connection becomes more and more like losing a friend.” If you're going to keep your memory on your smart phone, better make sure it's fully charged.
29. Google's eyeglasses are supposed to _____.
A. improve our memory B. function like memory.
C. help us see faces better. D. work like smart phones.
30. According to the passage, the underlined words “cognitive habits” refers to ______.
A. how we deal with information. B. functions of human memory.
C. the amount of information. D. the availability of information.
31. Which of the following statements about Sparrow's research is CORRECT?
A. We remember people and things as much as before.
B. We remember more Internet connections than before.
C. We tend to remember location rather than the core of facts.
D. We pay equal attention to location and content of information.
32. What is the implied message of the author?
A. Web connections aid our memory. B. People differ in what to remember.
C. People keep memory on smart phones. D. People need to exercise their memory.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Li Hua and as a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much to share
with my fellow student.
Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation for those stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it is high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is important. It’s the key to a success. Finally, I sincerely hope what all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it’s a good idea to play ball games, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make itself smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for health.