假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Now I'd like tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, in which I worked as the guide in a travel agency. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I've realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll learn to share worry with my parents. I've learned how to get along well with others. Beside, I have gained some social experience and you have learned something that can't be learned from textbook. In a word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.

    Dubai was a 6,000-person fishing village half a century ago. Since 1966, when oil was discovered there, the population of Dubai has grown to 2.6 million. Over the years, it (become) a well-known tourist destination .

    attracts tourists to Dubai are tax-free shopping, dry weather, excellent accommodations, delicious food and beaches that go on for miles. In fact, some foreigners come here only (experience) the shopping. There are dozens of shopping malls, (provide) every famous brand you can name. Those outdoor markets sell everything from spices (香料) to gold at fair prices.

    Choosing what places to visit in Dubai is difficult, because even the hotels there are also amazing (attract). The Burj A1 Arab is considered one of the world's best hotels, and is located on its own island, about 1,000 feet offshore from Dubai. Built in the shape of ship, this hotel is still (tall) than the Eiffel Tower and nearly as tall as the Empire State Building. Certainly, there are also other great places of interest to visit.

    Indeed, travelling around this country will (true) give you an amazing experience because of its interesting things  (offer) to all types of tourists.

He was just about to leave when someone.

    Why is setting goals so （importance）? Because goals can help you do, be, and experience everything you want in life. Instead always letting life happen to you accidentally, goals allow yourself (make) your life happen in control. (success) and happy people have set lots of goals to help them reach their aims. By (set) goals you can take control of your life. It's like having a map to show you you want to go.

    Winners in life always set goals and then follow. Winners decide what they want in life and then get there by making plans and setting goals. Unsuccessful people just let life happen by accident. (goal) are not difficult to set, and they are also not difficult to reach. It is up to you to find out what your goals really are. It is you decide what to do and in what direction to aim your life.

Joy to the World

    Lights, decorations and Christmas trees filled the stores. Many people were there 1 Christmas was only two days away.

    Thirteen-year-old Joy had just 2 her Christmas shopping. After Joy went out of the store, she came across her classmate, Nick, the least 3 student in school because he wore strange clothing and he had a face only a mother could love.

   "What are you doing for Christmas?" said Nick with a smile that showed all his yellow teeth.

   "I'm buying presents and having dinner with my 4," said Joy, trying to be polite." What about you?"

   "My parents are away," he said." I live with my uncle, who doesn't like me very much."

    Joy wasn't sure how to 5, so she said goodbye with an awkward smile. She felt sorry for Nick since he must feel 6. But that wasn't really her problem.  

    On Christmas Eve, Joy's family were busy around 7 for the holiday. Joy's parents were cooking in the kitchen. Joy was a child for holiday cheer, dancing 8 the house.

    After dinner, the family got into their car and 9 to church for the Christmas Eve service. When they walked into the old building, they were 10 by the flow of beautiful songs. A man stood up with Bible and 11 the story Joy had learned on her mother's knees. It was about a baby named Jesus who came to live on Earth to help people who 12 him.

    Joy's thoughts kept turning back to Nick. It must be 13 to be lonely on Christmas, a day that celebrated God's Son coming to Earth. Tears started to run down her 14, but she brushed them away.  

    Joy lay awake that night 15 everyone else was sleeping like a baby. She was thinking ways to help Nick. As soon as she heard parents get up, she 16 out of bed. She found them in the kitchen and told them about Nick. Then she asked," Can we invite him 17 today?" "Sure," said her mother, who was always happy when 18 came. Her father smiled.  

    When Joy called Nick later that day, he was excited. After getting his uncle's 19, he joined them for dinner. To her surprise, Joy enjoyed spending time with him.

    Joy came to understand 20 Christmas cheer is a joy to Nick, even to the whole world.

    As we know, it is important to be honest with children. But there are some things in this world that simply aren't 1 . Sometimes it makes sense for parents to2to their children.

    I still remember my three-year-old daughter's face when we watched the 3that twenty children at Sandy Hook Elementary School had been killed. After a few minutes she 4and put her5arms around my legs and said, “I love you, Momma.” I was still 6whether or not to turn the TV off when she, 7, asked, “Momma, why aren't those kids OK?” I just 8that they were smart children,9 they did something wrong and got punished.

    We're not all 10of a little lie here and there. Santa Claus, the Easter Bunny and Snow White are just a few examples of 11for parents to keep magic in the world. Magic, imagination and creativity are very essential in life, 12 for children. These stories battle against the negative aspects of the world and create 13. In the end children will be able to 14what is true and what was made to 15their lives. Out of five brothers and a sister I can happily report that not one of the children I grew up with was16when we discovered who all those17people really were.

    In life, a parent is the 18of knowledge, and it is up to the parent to decide what knowledge to teach and when. There's no 19to tell children all about the truth. As they become20, they will have a better understanding of the world.

    Computers have beaten human world champions at chess and, earlier this year, the board game Go. So far, though, they have struggled at the card table. So we challenged one AI to a game.

    Why is poker(扑克) so difficult? Chess and Go are “information complete” games where all players can see all the relevant information. In poker, other players' cards are hidden, making it an “information incomplete” game. Players have to guess opponents' hands from their actions—tricky for computers. Poker has become a new benchmark for AI research. Solving poker could lead to many breakthroughs, from cyber security to driverless cars.

    Scientists believe it is only a matter of time before AI once again vanquishes humans, hence our human-machine match comes up in a game of Texas Hold's Em Limit Poker. The AI was developed by Johannes Heinrich, researcher studying machine learning at UCL. It combines two techniques: neural(神经的) networks and reinforcement learning(强化学习).

    Neural networks, to some degree, copy the structure of human brains: their processors are highly interconnected and work at the same time to solve problems. They are good at spotting patterns in huge amounts of data. Reinforcement learning is when a machine, given a task, carries it out, learning from mistakes it makes. In this case, it means playing poker against itself billions of times to get better.

    Mr Heinrich told Sky News: “Today we are presenting a new procedure that has learned in a different way, more similar to how humans learn. In particular, it is able to learn abstract patterns, represented by its neural network, which allow it to deal with new and unseen situations.”

    After two hours of quite defensive play, from the computer at least, we called it a draw.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均限一词。

⑴Many people are opposed to cut down the old tree for building a shopping center.

⑵You can be physical addicted to nicotine, which is one of the hundreds of chemicals in cigarettes.

⑶I do hope so because I want you to live as long and healthy life as I have.

⑷The accident resulted from three men being killed.

⑸Please tell me the effect that smoking can have in sporting performance.

⑹I'd appreciate that if you could teach me how to use the computer.

⑺With the door being locked, the students couldn't get into the classroom.

⑻I enjoyed the movie very much. I wish I read the original book before.

⑼A medical team making up of three doctors and a nurse was sent there.

⑽The government has lifted the ban about importing from Japan.

未来世界

1）. 我相信未来是一个舒适、发达，让人满意的世界。气候温和，环境优美，污染问题彻底得到解决。

2）. 居住地：陆地，漂浮城市，海洋等。

3）. 交通方式：环保汽车，太空飞船，甚至利用时光机穿越过去或未来。

4）. 只要努力，一切都可能实现。

注意：

① 短文应包括所提示的内容，适当发挥；

② 要求书写清楚,句子通顺，语法正确。

The world in the future

    I believe that……