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I
visited the zoo yesterday, and I was very unhappy and angry about the things
what I saw. The large animals was in small cages. The lion was walking back and
forth. It was completely bored. The tiger fell sleep all the afternoon. I see
people feeding the fish. They were throwing rice and meat into the pond, which
could kill the fish, but no one tried stop them. When I had the drink at the
zoo restaurant, the waiter serve me rudely. Outside the restaurant, the rubbish
bins were full and rubbish was blowing everywhere. It seems that the zoo doesn't
look after the animals or the visitors very well.
答案:①and →but ②去掉what或what →that /which ③was →were ④bored →boring ⑤sleep →asleep ⑥see →saw ⑦tried后加to ⑧the →a ⑨serve →served ⑩blowing →blown