假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处. 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号
(^),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线
(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者
(从第11处起)不计分.
Grandpa
lives in a distant mountainous area with forests around. He runs a grocery
store, that wild animals appear from time on time. One day, two small
deer came to the door. They
looked hungrily and Grandpa gave them some food to eat. Since now, the two
deer have never left, lying in front of the shop after fed. Gradually, the lovely
deer are popular, attract a lot of people to see them. As the result,
Grandpa's business is getting even more better. The deer have become
an alive advertisement, so more but more customers come to buy item in the
store. Grandpa's
kindness is paying off.
答案:①that →where ②on →to ③hungrily →hungry ④now →then ⑤fed前加being ⑥attract →attracting ⑦the →a ⑧删除more ⑨but →and ⑩item →items