假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remembered my
working experience in a café last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a
drink. However, what attracted my attentions was not the menu, but a notice
said, "NOW HIRING". I took look at the requirements but thought maybe
I could have a try. On arriving home, I talked to my parents about get a
part-time job in the café during the summer vacation and he strongly supported
me. Determine to challenge myself, I went to the interview. Fortunate, I passed
it and I was really proud of myself!
答案:①remembered →remember。②into去掉。③attentions →attention。④said →saying或在said前加that/which。⑤在look前加a。⑥but →and。⑦get →getting。⑧将he →they。⑨Determine →Determined。⑩Fortunate →Fortunately。