假定英语课_上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划-
~横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
⒉只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mary,
My
name is Li Hua, a 18-year-old student from Eton middle school. To help the old
people in the nursing home, my classmates and me will go there this Sunday, As
the monitor of Class Two, I wanted to invite you to go with us.
Here
are some information about this activity, To begin with, we will leave for our
school by bus at 8 a.m, but return at 5 p.m. Besides, there will be a lot of
activity such as making dumplings and giving performances, that will be not
only interesting but also meaningful.
Hopeful, you will like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that
we will have a great time there. Looking forward your reply and your decision.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:①a改为an ②me改为 I ③wanted 改为want ④are改为is ⑤for删掉 ⑥but改为and ⑦activity 改为activities ⑧that改为which ⑨Hopeful改为Hopefully ⑩forward后加to