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假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。       2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 On July 20,1969, Neil Armstrong walked on the surface of the moon. Until then, no one knew how the moon was like. He saw that the ground was hard and there was a plenty of dust that looked like gray powder. He travelled from the earth by a spaceship called Apollo II. Then, while it stayed in space and move around the moon, Armstrong and another astronaut, Edwin Aldrin, climbed a small lunar module(登月舱)called Eagle. This capsule then took him to the moon. They spent three hours pick up moon rocks. After that, he used equipments to measuring the temperature and wind on the moon. While they finished their work, they put up an American flag in the ground. 答案：On July 20,1969,Neil Armstrong walked on the surface of the moon. Until then, no one knew how(what) the moon was like. He saw that the ground was hard and there was a (去掉a)plenty of dust that looked like gray powder. He travelled from the earth by(in) a spaceship called Apollo II. Then, while it stayed in space and move(moved) around the moon, Armstrong and another astronaut, Edwin Aldrin, climbed into/onto a small lunar module(登月舱)called Eagle. This capsule then took him (them)to the moon. They spent three hours pick(picking) up moon rocks. After that, he used equipments(equipment) to measuring the temperature and wind on the moon. While(After/When) they finished their work, they put up an America(American) flag in the ground.

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