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   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。    删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。   修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;      2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。      Last Sunday, the Student Association of our school was organized an activity to visit the children in the poorest village of our city. As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children. They were excited to receive our gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them which were played in our childhood. Then we cooked and have lunch there. In a afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the village, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help, but in return, they gave us their thanks and smiles. 答案：1.在organized 前的was去掉 分析句子的意思，可知道主语the Student Association是组织了一次活动，故用主动语态，was是多余的。 2．volunteer →volunteers 根据句意，可知道volunteer（志愿者）肯定不止一个，故用复数形式。 3．在well后面加as 在英语中，as well as是固定搭配，意思是：也。此短语后面要接宾语。 4．which → that 分析句子，可知这是一个定语从句，由于在定语从句的先行词game前加上了不定代词some，故引导词只能用that不能用which。 5．have → had 分析句子的意思，可知道本句中and前的动词是用一般过去时cooked，故此处也要用一般过去时，因此要改成had。 6．In a afternoon → In the afternoon 在英语中，“在下午 ”此一表达法习惯写成in the afternoon，故把a改成the。 7．take → taken 在英语的表达中，have sth．done是固定搭配，意思是：让某事被做。 8．they → we  由于本句前面的主语一直都是用we，而且根据句意，此处还是继续要用we。 9．happily → happy 根据句子的意思，可知此处要用一个形容词来修饰名词time，故用happy。 10．but → and 分析句意，并结合前后两个句子的逻辑意义，可知道此处应该用表示并列的连词and。

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