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  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。  修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；       2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Hello, Jack. I’m so glad to have received your letter. Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that you are punished for using cell phones, that puzzled you. It is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenient. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, playing with the cell phone is a great fun. However, there are some problems with using cell phones. The ring of phones must disturb teachers and students in class. It has proved that often using cell phones do harm to health. And another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money in cell phones, thus result in poor scores in study. As a student, you should concentrate on study. It is right for your school to prevent you from using cell phones. 答案：Hello, Jack. I’m so glad to have received your letter.      Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that you are punished using cell phones, that puzzled you.          It is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenient. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, playing with the cell phone is a great fun. However, there are some problems with using cell phones. The ring of phones must disturb teachers and students in class. It has proved that often using cell phones do harm to health. And another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money in cell phones, thus result in poor scores in study. As a student, you should concentrate on study. It is right for your school to prevent you from using cell phones. 1.  are改成were 2.  that改成which 3. It 改成 There 4. convenient改成convenience 5.  a 去掉 6. must 改成may/can 7. 加上been 8.  do 改成does 9. in 改成 on 10. result 改成resulting

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