One cold winter night in Shanghai, I was walking home at one in the morning after long tiring work. I was having trouble with my job in the bank. As I walked, I thought seriously about giving up living there. City life had become too much for me.

 As I walked down empty streets, I felt very small and cold. I began running, both to keep warm and to keep away any possible danger. Very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets（毛毯）.

 Suddenly, I heard a sound behind me. I turned quickly, all I saw was a shining streetlight. Still, the noise had made me nervous, so I started to run faster. When I reached home, I realized what the noise had been. It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk.

 Now I wasn't cold or tired anymore. I ran back to where I'd heard the noise. Although I searched carefully for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found.

 Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck（垃圾车）come to me. When a voice called from the inside, “Alisa Chen?” I thought I was dreaming. How could this man know my name? The door opened, and out jumped a small red-haired man “Is this what you’re looking for?”he asked, holding up a small square shape.

 It was nearly 3 a. m. by the time I got into bed. But I had got my wallet back. I also had got back some enjoyment of city life. I realized that the city couldn't be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other. 

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My friends are very important for me. With friends, we make ourselves strong! Before class, I was nervous at this report. My friend Jenny gave me some good advice, and you all encouraged me. Now I feel much confident. You are all my friends. We work together. We help each others. I work hard in school and I hope to go to a college someday. I'd like to be an English teacher when I grow up.

I am very good at English. I write letters and talk to my English friends. This gives me some confidence to speaking English. I often make mistakes when I speak English, but I believe that practice makes perfect.

I practice English a lot of in class and after school. I love to sing. I also like to play the ping-pong. Some times I lose, but usually I win. I am one of the best player in the school. Sometimes I am not well organized. I will try to improve. I believe I can do better.

Thank you!

the dress Mom bought for her fashionable?

—Because he kept on asking her personal questions, which was annoying.

do you go to bed every evening?

Don't     these shy students.

— Differences? Oh, no. They look quite ________.

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