假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keep a
dog as my pet and companion. My parents disagreed, saying that I was too young
that I couldn't take care of me, let alone a dog. I didn't give up. Instead, I
tried to be independence and often helped with housework. A few month later, my
parents found that I had become more considerate than before. They finally
approve of my request. On my eighth birthday, they bought me lovely dog as a gift.
Followed my parents' directions, I've learned how to raise the dog. I still
miss those old days that we accompanied with each other.
答案:①keep →keeping ②too →so ③me →myself ④independence →independent ⑤month →months ⑥approve →approved ⑦lovely a ⑧Followed →Following ⑨that →when ⑩accompanied with 删除with