假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余 词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 . When I was in the 6th grade, my parents bought me a cell phone. I was really exciting to receive the phone. The next weekend, my family went on camping in the East Lake Park. We enjoy boating on the lake. I used our new phone to play some of my favorite song. I thought it would be brilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting it from water. After getting back, I took the phone in, only to find the bag full of water. I didn't know what to save my phone and I tried laying it out to dry. Unfortunately, it started to rain. What an awfully experience!
答案:①exciting →excited ②去掉on ③enjoy →enjoyed ④our →my ⑤song →songs ⑥brilliant前面加a ⑦protecting →protect ⑧in →out ⑨what →how ⑩awfully →awful