假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A charity sale was held in our school
playground in last Sunday. We prepared many things making by hand, such as
kites and model planes. We also brought old toys or second- hand books to sell.
When the activity started, lots of students participated in them and chose
their favorite items. In end, we made 2,000 yuan in all. We donate the money to
the community to help children who couldn't attend school.
I had a wonderfully experience. I am
proud of which we have done. If everyone makes a contribution for the charity,
the world will become much good than it used to be.
答案:①去掉第二个in ②making →made ③or →and ④them →it ⑤end 前加the ⑥donate →donated ⑦wonderfully →wonderful ⑧which →what ⑨for →to ⑩good →better