假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David发邮件来询问你寒假的旅游体验,请你给他回复邮件。内容包括:1. 手机支付;2. 人脸识别景区;3. 邀请他来体验。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:手机支付mobile payment;人脸识别 face recognition_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案:【答案】Dear David,I’m happy to hear from you. As for what I have experienced during the winter holiday, here’s something I’d like to share with you.When travelling with my parents on a customized tour, I’m amazed at the changes and convenience brought by artificial intelligence. Wherever and whenever we went, we could use mobile payment. More interestingly, unlike the previous years when we had to get into tourist attractions with the ID card, we did it through a face recognition app, which really saved time. What an amazing experience!I do hope you can come to China and experience all of this when you have spare time. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David发邮件来询问你寒假的旅游体验,请你给他回复邮件。内容包括:1. 手机支付;2. 人脸识别景区;3. 邀请他来体验。人称使用第一人称,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:hear from(收到来信),experience(体验),winter holiday(寒假),artificial intelligence(人工智能)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。