假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均限--词
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hope everything goes well with you. In terms
of your unhealth lifestyle, I'm writing to give you some suggestion.
First of all, green and nutritious foods are
necessary to our daily life, without that we can't build a healthy body.
However, it's time that you can eat more fruits and vegetables rather than fast
food. Drinking water instead of coke cola is wise choice. Second, you're
supposed to cut down the time spending on the electronic products, which it is
beneficial to your eyes and brain.
The last point to bear in mind is that early
to bed or early to rise will make a man healthy, wealthy and wisely. Hope my
advice can benefit you.
答案:①unhealthy →unhealthy ②suggestion →suggestions ③that →which ④However →Therefore ⑤can →should ⑥is后面加a ⑦spending →spent ⑧去掉it ⑨or →and ⑩wisely →wise