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读后续写 The story between Mr. Jordan and me was the most amazing story I wanted to share. Mr. Jordan was one of the teachers who I would never forget. When I was young at school, I loved talking, a characteristic not always appreciated by Mr. Jordan, my 10-grade English teacher. Mr. Jordan was a teacher whom no one liked because he was too strict. He stood about 5-foot-five, was very thin and wore his hair pulled back in a way that gave him a horsy look. He wore those half-circular reading glasses. Whenever he got upset, he would lower his head and look at you over the top of his glasses. One day in his class I was busy talking. I didn't realize he had stopped teaching and staring straight at me. "Sam, I would like to see you after school." Later Mr. Jordan explained in a low, but very firm voice that showed he expected me to listen when he was talking. For punishment he told me to write a thousand-word essay on education and its effect on the society. He wanted it in by the following Wednesday. Well, I met my deadline. I was confident. It was a good paper. And I expected a sign of approval from him. The next day in class, however, he was looking at me over his glasses. He called me forward and returned my paper. "Go back and rewrite," he said. "Remember, each paragraph is supported to begin with a topic sentence." When he gave my paper back a second time, he corrected the grammar. The third time, the spelling. The fourth time, it was punctuation. The fifth, it wasn't neat enough. I was sick! The sixth time, I rewrote the whole paper slowly in ink, leaving generous space. When he saw it, he removed his glasses and smiled. He firmly accepted the paper. After that, I put the whole thing out of my mind. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1: One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said， Paragraph 2: I was amazed, thrilled and grateful. 答案：   One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said，"Class, do you still remember the essay contest held in our school？They've announced the winners. I am so glad to inform you that Sam has won the first prize in the essay contest with the title 'Education and Its Effect on the Society'. "Then thunderous applause rocked the classroom. After class, many classmates asked me how I made it. Without excellent writing skills, I well remembered that I told them it was all about six-times rewriting urged by Mr. Jordan. I was amazed, thrilled and grateful. It was the first time I had ever won a prize. Years later, I told many people that story, and my comments, including my unfriendly description of Mr. Jordan's appearance. Unexpectedly, Mr. Jordan wrote to me, and said that his look wasn't important. What was important was the lesson I had learnt. When I wrote and rewrote that paper for him, I began to learn how to discipline myself. I was grateful for the lesson he had taught me.

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