假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I am a little girl, I
wanted to be a film star. I thought it would be cool to be in the middle of the
stage. I used to thinking if I became a film star, I would make many money and
lead a happy and rich life. But I changed my dream. Over the recently months, I
have seen many doctors and nurses who tried their best save others despite the
danger they face and tiredness. They are real hero in our society. They are the
most beautiful people in your heart, who, as a matter of fact, deserves our
highest respect. I have been made up my mind to be one of them and to be an
useful person.
答案:①am →was; ②thinking →think; ③many →much; ④recently →recent; ⑤save前加to; ⑥hero →heroes; ⑦your →my; ⑧deserves →deserve; ⑨去掉have后的been; ⑩an→a