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My classmates and I went to the Beijing
Exhibition Hall to see the exhibition on China's achievements in last Saturday.
The exhibition attracted thousand of people
all over the country, so we had to wait for a long time to get in. Luckily, we
met a docent(讲解员) who gave us a
introduction of the development during these years. We listened attentive and
were deeply impressed by the brilliant success of our County. When we step into
the Hi-tech display section, our eyes were caught by the high-speed train model
"Fuxing". We were so amazing at it that we couldn't help take
pictures all the time. After leaving, with the words "Chinese Dream"
as a setting, we had a group photo to record the great moment.
The visit to the exhibition gives me greater
faith in Chinese dream, that our personal dreams are closely related to.
答案:①删去in ②thousand → thousands ③a →an ④attentive →attentively ⑤step →stepped ⑥amazing →amazed ⑦take →taking ⑧After →Before ⑨me →us ⑩that →which