1. Those who eager for success will make every effort to achieve it. 2. This particular sad event left a deep impression to Pliny who had lost an uncle in the eruption. 3. Trying to learn the word “love” was a experience that she remembered well. 4. Miss Sullivan put her arm gentle round me 5. She had a breakthrough while work on a simple task. 6. Mr Fan, the English teacher, the large but friendly man, seeing me and gave me a nasty surprise. 7. I read from my book instead reciting the poems. 8. The day started to go wrong the instant when I left home. 9. I had to wait for the school bus for ages. 10. One person, sitting alone, look like he is praying.
答案:1. who后加are 2.particular改成particularly to改成on 3.Try改成Trying a改成an 4. gentle改成gently 5. work改成working 6.seeing改成saw 7.instead后加of 8.删掉when 9. age改成ages 10. Look改成looks