假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 My friend Li Ming used to being upset about some small things and couldn’t keep calmly. His classmates were tired of him and ignored him. Teachers were concerned about him and often talked about him face to face, therefore, all the efforts were in vain. One day at dusk, he suffers from a stomachache. The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took well care of him. After he recovered, he was gratitude to the teachers and classmates. From then on, he no longer disturbs with his classmates and often joins them in settling some problems. He is getting along well with his classmates and becomes caring student. As far as I’m concerned, it’s the love and care from the teachers and his classmates who has changed him entirely.
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