题目

   I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time. 答案：1.visit改为visiting 2.come 改为came 3.In改为On 4.there改为where 5.flag前面加上the 6.exciting改为excited 7.attraction改为attractions 8.proudly改为proud 9.fail改为fails 10.删去but，或but改为yet

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