读后续写 62 .阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Lost Ball One day Kaya and I were playing with the ball and the ball went into Taku's house. Though we were scared, we went to his house and asked him if he could return our ball. He said “No”. We felt helpless. Suddenly, I had an idea. There was a water tank (水箱) behind Taku's house. I looked at it and said, "Kaya, look at this. We can climb up the water tank and jump over the gate." Kaya agreed, but we were both wearing skirts. We couldn't climb with that. "It doesn't matter. We can come tomorrow. Don't forget to wear pants." said Kaya. “Bye,” I said and went home. The next day I went to Kaya's house early. We were both wearing pants. "Best of luck!" said Kaya's brother Vijay who knew everything. He said, “Shout loudly if you need me.” We went to the water tank. "Who will climb first?" asked Kaya. “You!” I said. She agreed. She climbed down into Taku's house. I followed her and then we were looking under a bed for the ball when we heard a noise. It was Vijay. “Mother is calling you,” he whispered (悄声地说) . We hurried and took out the lost ball. But along with the ball was a gold bar! We quickly took both the ball and the gold bar and climbed up the water tank again. When we reached Kaya's house, the TV was on. It was news time. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I couldn't believe my ears when it said that 20 gold bars were stolen (偷) from a gold shop. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The police came at once and searched Taku's house. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案: One possible version: I couldn't believe my ears when it said that 20 gold bars were stolen (偷) from a gold shop. It also showed a picture of the gold bars and they were exactly like the one we had found in Taku's house. We all immediately understood what it was because there was a look of surprise on every one's face. We quickly told the story to Kaya's mother and she called the police. The police came at once and searched Taku's house . They found the rest of the gold bars under Taku's bed in his house. They also caught Taku and took him to the police station. A few days later, the police came to Kaya's home and told us, "Thank you, children, for catching the thief. Here is a reward for both of you." When we opened the gift, we were surprised that there were two detective storybooks for Kaya and me. 【解析】 【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了小作者和朋友的球掉到了邻居家里,可是邻居拒绝还球,这两个女孩就跳墙进去找到了球,还同时发现了一根金条的故事。 【详解】 1. 段落续写: ① 由第一段首句内容 “ 听说一家金店有 20 根金条被盗,我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。 ” 可知,第一段可描写猜测邻居塔库可能偷窃了金条并报警。 ② 由第二段首句内容 “ 警察马上就来搜查了塔库的房子。 ” 可知,第二段可描写作者警察破案,抓住邻居,感谢我们提供线索。 2. 续写线索:玩球 —— 邻居拒绝还球 —— 跳墙找球 —— 发现金条 —— 报警 —— 破案 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ① 看到 , 发现: find / see / spot ② 立即: instantly / immediately ③ 抓获逮捕: catch / capture / arrest 情绪类 ①. 感谢: show appreciation/show gratitude/be grateful /thank sb. ② 开心,惊喜: delighted/surprised 【点睛】 [ 高分句型 1]. It also showed a picture of the gold bars and they were exactly like the one we had found in Taku's house. (运用了省略了关系代词 that 的定语从句修饰不定代词 one ) [ 高分句型 2]. We all immediately understood what it was because there was a look of surprise on every one's face. (由 what 引导的宾语从句和 because 引导的状语从句) [ 高分句型 3]. When we opened the gift, we were surprised that there were two detective storybooks for Kaya and me. ( when 引导的时间状语从句,和 that 引导的宾语从句)