Summer is coming. The weather becomes hotter and hotter. A lot of people like swimming in the swimming pools or in the sea. They think water makes them (feel)cool. But some people are not careful enough. They often think they can swim (good) than others and they don't have to worry about anything. So these years, many accidents happened and some people (lose) their lives. Most of them were students. As we all know, (safe) is the most important. Do you know to protect yourself?(protect)yourself, you must be careful. Remember not to swim in a (danger) place. Don't swim alone, and you see a "No Swimming" sign, don't swim, either. Of course, you can swim someone who can keep you safe. If you remember these, swimming(be)safer.
文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧ ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
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I'll never forget the first day at school. It has left a deep1 on me.
The primary school that I attended was not far from my home. As soon as I rushed into the classroom, the bell 2 . A young beautiful woman came in, but she was 3 , with no smile on her face. "You are not permitted to 4 me in the course of class unless..." She was speaking when I heard a 5 "Lily, Lily" from outside the door.My grandmother was standing there with a pair of socks in her hand. I didn't realize I was bare feet 6 then. I wanted to 7 them. But I dared not do that. I shook my hand, 8 "Don't wait here any longer. Leave quickly." As I did so, I still 9 my eyes on my teacher. I really didn't want her to take 10 of me, but she did. She went out to get the socks. When she gave them to me, she looked at me for a while. My face suddenly turned 11 and my heart beat faster. I began to put the socks on. Unfortunately I was so nervous that my 12 hands couldn't get them 13 my feet easily. Just then I heard my name called. I 14from my seat quickly. "Can you count the numbers from one to one hundred?" the teacher asked. I nodded. Much15 her surprise, I did very 16 . Finally she said, "You did a good job. Be seated, please. Work hard at your lesson." I looked up at her to find a(n) 17 on her face. I felt 18 at last.
The first day at school has stayed in my 19 as something 20 but sweet.
1)希望能够派车接送;
2)需要一名说标准英语,并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游;
3)请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况;
4)你的联系方式:电子邮箱地址:Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或电话号码:07747745007
注意:1)词数:100词左右;
2)开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数;
3)参考词汇:诺丁汉大学Nottingham University; 旅馆住宿accommodation;旅行日程安排itinerary;长途客车coach。
Hi, Phil,
I'd like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us.……
Yours truly,
Jack
How do you usually buy what you need, shopping online or going out to shop in person? With the help of the Internet, shopping is (easy)than before. We can just click our mouse to choose the items we like, pay for them online, and the shopping is (finish). It is easy and quick. It helps save money, too. We can save thousands a year if we compare the prices of similar items before (decide) which to buy.
However, there are always traps in shopping online. If we are (care), we may get into trouble. For example, we may find the color of the item different that in the picture online. Sometimes, the size the item we receive can be too big or too small. (avoid)such troubles, we should compare similar items on different online stores and pay more attention to what other customers say. From their comments, we can know (well) about an item's color, size as well as shortcomings. In this way we increase our chance of (buy) a more satisfactory item.