增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Yesterday my friend Julia and me had lunch in the Pizza Hut behind our school. I knew Julia wasn't crazy about pizzas, but she came along just because me. At the table next to ours, there were two guys from our class. One of them was real funny. He tried to imitate all the customer in the Pizza Hut. We couldn't stop to laughing. And there were some people whom did not like the fact that two boys were imitating them. They complained to an owner of the Pizza Hut, so he came over and tell them to stop. Seeing it, Julia and I was greatly embarrassed.
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After travelling many times with my family members, I went alone to Italy for a long weekend. I traveled by a train and checked into my hotel before exploring the beautiful town. I went out for dinner alone, that meant I could watch people and took in the atmosphere. The next day I went to Lake Garda and took some lovely picture. I then read a book and sat under the sun for a few hours! I had a really amazed time. I think the best thing about traveling alone is you can be selfish and do exactly what you want to. You are in control of your day and fun, but my advice is to take the opportunity to travelling alone. As long as you stay safely, you will have a wonderful time!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. What we all know, a good learning environment is of greatly importance if we want to study English well. Classes teaching in English provide students for a better environment. When English is an only language in class, students will have more opportunity to practise listening and speaking. However, there were problems with this method. Sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher and some slow learners may even give up learn English. In spite of these difficulties, but I believe practice makes perfect. With enough practice, we can overcome the difficulties and benefit from English classes in the long run.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
①The function of smile is to show happiness and put people to ease.
②It is hard work as well as determination that have made him achieve everything he wanted.
③The actors in Disneyland brought much fun to the visitors, made them laugh happily.
④The boy's dream to take a trip to England has been come true.
⑤Body language makes possible for us to understand others better.
⑥Today most people around the world are more like to greet each other by shaking hands.
⑦To our great amuse, the kids performed on the stage in a funny way.
⑧News came from the school office which Fang Jianxun had been admitted to Tsinghua University.
⑨The detective novel is a attraction for me.
⑩Some parks are famous for traditional culture, other for showing the unique sights.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1) 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2) 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分
I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope. It has set up to help the children in the countryside which can't afford to go to school. After school I went home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project then I caught a sight of my money-collecting box on the table. Then I made up my minds to send my pocket money which I had saved for nearly one year for the children who want to go to school. I wrote a letter to him and hurried to the post office. Together with a letter I posted the money and send my best wishes to them.
注意:1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”
It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn't do very well in all my English exams. Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to accept this reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1).每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One day,on her way to school,Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station.He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside.From the calling card,she discover the owner's address and his telephone number.She thought the owner must very worried.So she went to the public telephones and called the owner.Then she waited at the bus station.The owner came by taxi very soon,but Li Lan gave the bag to him.The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan,but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago I was admitted to an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerately. What's more, I was very fond in the friendly atmosphere in class. I was determined to make best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always ready to helping me out. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which made me to become confident and motivated.
What I experienced in high school tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of that Chinese and math will be test, the second day physics, chemistry, biology and English. Over the past ten months, they have been busy in preparing this examination. Besides listen to teachers carefully in class, we often work deeply into the night. Therefore, I believe it I can succeed. At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because I came to realize that Chinese and math was very easy and English is my favorite subjects. So I suppose I can get the good marks which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xia
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a senior three student, it won't take long after I graduate. Now, I have many to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I'd like to show my appreciation to those who stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends including. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I've made my mind to make every effort to study, for hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope that all the young fellow can make full use of time, because time and tide waited for no man.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin Li Ming told me he would be taking his driver's test again. He seemed confidence, although he have failed his first road test. I felt sympathy for him, think he might have a same fear he did last time. I encouraged him, though I was not so optimistic about their chances. Later on, he called share the good news that he had passed it. Before the road test, our family gathered excited at his house. I congratulated him with a hug. I asked him to drive with me anywhere he liked. Three of our cousin piled in with us and we took our first ride with Li Ming.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the community lecture concerns garbage classification. As we all known, garbage classification is quite important for environmental protection, so we should try our best make it.
Garbage classification not only benefits the environment, and it can reduce the workload of workers. More important, it can help us develop a sense of rules and form good habits for yourselves. What's more, the garbage where is classified can be recycled and turned into valueless resources.
The lecture will be held in the hall at 9 am next Sunday. I hope you can all come and join in us. Making a contribution to garbage classification, please.
Yours,
Hongqi Community
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字的符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
⑴Take an umbrella, in the case it rains.
⑵It was Bob's quick action which saved my life.
⑶The other driver accused Wilson with driving dangerously.
⑷Teaching is a job which you are doing something serious but interesting.
⑸If inviting, I will attend the wedding of my friend.
⑹I suggested that he adapted himself to his new conditions.
⑺Exhaustedly, he slid into bed and fell fast asleep.
⑻His breakfast usually consist of dry bread and a cup of tea.
⑼Never he come to school late.
⑽Some Public Service Ads mainly aim to make some contribution to society.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
As is known to us, a large number of wild animals has been killed for their meat skins, etc. As a result, thousand of animals have either died out and become endangered.
Actually, protect wild animals benefits the animals as well as humans. For an example, if farmers killed too many eagles, their corn and grain will be destroyed by rats. The reason is because with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase rapid.
Therefore, all of us must do something to protect wild animals. As for me, I have joined an organization in our town which aim is to call on people to protect wild animals and I have taken part several activities.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in middle school, I enjoyed reading science books, and they were really difficult to understand them. Whenever a problem beats me, I would turn to my physics teacher for help. Go through materials together page by page, we were tearing the mask of nature off. It was his guidance which encouraged me to study physics serious today. Now we're in a period when science plays an important role on people's lives. From construction workers who build laboratories to teachers who pass on knowledges, everyone contributes to science in their own unique ways. All in all, science is everlasting topic for mankind. Faced with it, we must make ourselves well preparing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧):并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was my birthday yesterday. I'm sixteenth years old now. Some people say I'm luckily but it's not totally true. Up till now I had been to eight different schools and I have never stayed anywhere long enough make good friend. I have lived in so much different houses which I can't remember any of them. In a fact, last year my family moved three times. Of course there are some good things. I have met some really interesting people, but I have had several great holiday-I have been to Disneyland at least four times. I'm stayed with my aunt at the moment because my parents are in France.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With a helmet, a small camera and a climbing stick, Cheng Yongmao, his work is repairing the Great Wall, is headed for the Jiankou section of the Great Wall early in the morning. It is one of the most dangerous parts of the Great Wall. To less the transportation burden, animals are used to carry bricks all the way to the foot of the mountain, and manual workers then shoulder bricks to the repair sites. Before arriving at the repair sites, they are often worn out.
The size of the Great Wall bricks is different from those of ordinary bricks. Cheng firmly disagrees with the idea to replace the ancient bricks with similar ones to cut cost. For Cheng, even after hundreds of years, the materials, crafts or practices are used in ancient buildings still need to be followed.
Cheng still insists climbing the Great Wall at most once a week to provide technical guidance for repair workers. He hopes he can contribute more to cultural relics protection.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号
(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线
(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者
(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I came across the foreign girl on the street, who looked worried. To understand what the matter was about her, I went up to her but we had a talk. At first, she spoke very fast that I couldn't follow her. Realizing she couldn't make herself understand, she spoke more slowly. By talk with her, I learnt she wasn't able to find out her hotel. She became anxiously, so I decided take her there. It took us one and a half hour to get to her hotel. When we said goodbye, she said, "I cannot thank you enough."
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every time I think of the funny experience several months ago, I can't help laughing.
On the night before the history exam, I stayed up all night, goes over the lessons. Therefore, during the exam, I was such sleepy and tired that I fell asleep. I dreamed about having an important exam. The site when we were having the exam was the dining hall. In my dream, the questions in the exam paper was all beyond my ability. I got more and more anxiously. And finally I woke up, am terrified to find that I was really having an exam! What's worse, there were only five minutes left for me finish the paper!
This funny experience also taught me the lesson. From then on, I dare not stay up late after exams. Instead, I tried to be well prepared as early as possible and make sure of enough sleep.