文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for hold such a wonderful party for me before the day of your returning to Australia. I really can't thank you enough for that you've done for me during my visit.
I remembered vividly the day I arrive here. I was deeply impressed by your kindness or the beautiful scenery of your city. Everything was more awesome than visiting the splendid Mount Huang on third day. And the memory will surely last a lifetime. I'm also glad to have made many friends here, to whom I hope to see again in the future.
I believe this visit will promote the friendship and understanding between the Australian and Chinese student. Once again , I want to extend my most sincerely gratitude to all of you.
Thank you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many ways you can show respect to others. In some cases, what you should do is listen patient when someone is speaking, even if you have anything important to say. Some other ways you can show respect includes the following ones. Take a care of borrowed things. When you borrow something but take good care of it, the person you borrowed it will surely appreciate it. Be polite, follow the rules, and practicing good manner. Clean up the mess you have made. If you don't clean up by yourself when you make a mess, someone else will have to. This can make people frustrating.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear the teachers and schoolmates, it's a great honor for me to be here today and share my experiences of learning English with you. I want to learn English good to take good job, so I learn English in some difference ways. In class, I learn new words, useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher. After class, you do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination. I also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source. I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏间词符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(——),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11)不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I as seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
Ore evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Though English is a hard subject, but I like my English teacher a lot, and so are my classmates. She is nice to us and always tells us stories of the days when she was in her twenty. Sometimes she even stayed in school to help students make up for their lessons. She always encourages us and tells us do our best. We are gratefully to her, so one day we bought him a cake and a gift. We also made a big card for her, on it we wrote all our names. Seeing these, she was moving and had a big smile in her face.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While the Greens went to the theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over $10,000 from a safe, the dog lied down in its basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty minutes later, the burglars have gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. When the first policeman entered the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Li Hua, who is a Senior 3 student from Xing Guang Middle School. Every day I have to get up at 6:10 am, when much people are still sleeping. I'm busy with my studies when I have a lot of homework to do, which make me feel under great pressure. English is the subject in that I'm interested. When I feel stressed, I'll turn my best friend Mike for help. We have been best friend since we are very young. Whenever I'm in a trouble, he will cheer him up. Now I'm trying my best to prepare for the college entrance examination. I hope to be admit into Anhui University.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jim arrived in home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find the open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not know how to do. Kate, his wife, had obvious gone out. He didn't know where she had gone or when she would return. Finally, picked up a stone, he threw them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
How are you?
A well-known play, Tea House, will put on in the newly-built Grand Theater in our city at 7:00 p.m. in 5th, February. I knew you are fond of Chinese culture, but I sincerely invite you to go with me. It is said that it is performed quite well by some famous actors and actress. If you are interesting in this play, I will book tickets in advance and we can appreciate it together. I think it is really a good chance for us to learn more about Chinese tradition plays.
Besides, there is a provincial museum near a theater, which is worth visiting it after the play.
How do you think of my advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. They remind me of my days in senior high school which I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school. It was the first time that I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficult to fit. And the training officer was strict with me. I once thought I couldn't stick to the end. But anyway, I was succeeded. The trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life, but I think the difficulty I came across have now become a precious memory in my life.
In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as the stepping stone to future success and make the best of them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:①每处错误及其修改均限一词;②只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This afternoon, I went home by bus as usual. I was listening music when I suddenly noticed the bus stop that I should get off. Then I hurried off a bus. But when I arrived home, I find that my wallet was gone—some money and several important card were in it. Eager to get the wallet back, so I rushed to the bus company for help. Lucky, at the Lost and Found office, I saw my wallet. I felt so delighting that I wanted to thank the person who had turned them in. However, I was told the man hadn't left his name. I can't imagine how a great man he is!
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意: 1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Li Lei. My parent love me very much. And it doesn't mean I can do everything I want at the home.
First, I should finish your homework before Saturday evening to make sure I have enough time to make a review. It's necessarily. Second, I have to do wash by myself. This means I won't have enough time to play. I don't really understand what they ask me to do so.Third, I must sleep before 11 in the evening and get up at 6 the morning. I hoped I could sleep till 10 am someday.
My friends seldom have enough time to relax,too. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
⒉只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。
Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really bring inconvenience. I couldn't rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I perform worse in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizer and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduce the music noise. Only this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their joy, they adopted my suggestion.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear peter,
I'm more than happy to hearing from you and grateful for your advices. As we know, a great number of students has improved their studies by taking part in weekend classes. And I won't do so, because of I think it's not suitable for me. Weekend classes often focus on lots of exercises and teachers give lessons at a fast speed. It's not good for a student like me who doesn't have a good command of basically knowledge. What's more, it will cost a lot of money if I took part in weekend classes, that will increase the economic burden of my parents.
As for improve my study, I will change my learning method and pay more attention to the understanding of basic knowledge. If necessary, I will ask my classmates and teachers help me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Each student are supposed to give a duty report in our English lessons. The report is usually delivered at beginning of the class. It was my turn to give one on last Friday. I spent a lot of time prepare for it in advance. However, as soon as I started to speak, I felt such nervous that I spoke in a low voice and in broken English. I even didn't dare to look at my classmate. After a short while, seeing his teacher's trustworthy smiling face, I gain much encouragement and confidence. Final, I managed to make it. I've learnt that he which dares to have a try will succeed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my good friend told me that he was going to drop out of school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but I failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is important than the results. Now there is only 90 days left before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I need your advices.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
②只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
By the time Tom graduated from Yale University, he has undertaken a part-time job for 3 years, from that he accumulated abundant experience. However, he was much cast down by his failure to find a satisfying job. It occur to him that he should apply to the position provide by that large company. A great many applicant participated in the interview. Apparent , the competition was fierce. The advantage was which he had a good command of English. He owed to his first English teacher that he had a good pronunciation. Fortunately, all his efforts were not in the vain and he succeeded in finding his ideal job.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
②只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While it comes to how to meet a challenge, I think of my experience in learning maths.
When I was in junior middle school, I had great difficulties in learning maths. To change the situation, I made great efforts. Firstly, I bought some reference books and got prepared before class, make it easy for me to understand that the teacher would teach. Secondly, I listened attentive in class and took notes carefully, which helped my accumulate a basic knowledge. Thirdly I did my homework on time and turn to my teacher for help when I had problems. Finally I caught with others.
Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Facing with challenges, I respond positively and overcome them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm Li Hua. I'm from Guangming Middle School. We're going to have a "English Day" in our school in December 20. The purpose of the "English Day" is enrich our school life. Above all
it will help arouse students' interest in learning English or improve our oral English.
In order to take part in this activities, we were preparing an English short play. We would appreciate it that if you could come and give us some help, especial in our oral English.
Would you come to Room 307 on the three floor in the teaching building at 4 pm on December 5? We are looking forward to see you there. Thank you very much!
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. However, they quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.