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Four
months ago I am walking on the campus when I heard two students saying that Mrs.
Wu, whom had been teaching us English for two years, would retire the next
month.
I
returned to the classroom and shared the news for my classmates. To express our
thanks to Mrs. Wu for her patient teaching, we agreed on a celebrate after a
heated discussion.
After school we began to make fully preparations. I went to the flower shop, where I bought a bunch of flowers. represents our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmates had some PowerPoint slides make, which included a number of photo recording the touching moments we spent together.
When
she came into the classroom on Wednesday morning, and all of us stood up. I
presented the flowers to her. With tears in her eyes. Mrs. Wu greatly moved by
what we did! She said her feelings were beyond words.
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