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Recently, every morning and
evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, where is designed
to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the
long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really bring
inconvenience. I couldn't rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I
felt such sleepy in class that I perform worse in study. To solve a problem, I
communicated with the organizer and suggested that they should shorten the
dance time and reduce the music noise. Only this way can they have fun and let
others enjoy life. To their joy, they adopted my suggestion.
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