假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The first time I went to Beijing Zoo was several year ago with my father. I clearly remembered that it was a Sunday in October. We joined a tour group and set off early than usual. I enjoyed the beautiful scenes along the way because I was exciting. It took us about three hours to arrive here. On arriving, I jumped off the bus and went straight see pandas. They were very lovely that I kept taking photos. Then I had paid a visit to the aquarium, where there have thousands of fishes and other sea creatures. The experience left a impression on me.
答案:①year →years ②remembered →remember ③early →earlier ④exciting →excited ⑤here →there ⑥straight 后加to ⑦so →very ⑧去掉had ⑨have →are⑩a →an