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你的英国好友Jim计划去非洲做志愿者，但是他的父母以安全为由反对，他发来邮件讲述此事。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1．你对该计划的看法；2．你的建议。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 答案：【答案】Dear Jim,I have to admit that when I learned about your plan, I was filled with admiration for your choice. Volunteering in Africa will definitely offer great help to the people in need. I believe it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience and do hope your dream will come true. However, our dream shouldn’t bring concerns to those who love and care about us. So you’d better not quarrel with your parents. It doesn’t help. Think why they are worried about your safety. Is your destination a safe one? My suggestion is to do some research on the program you plan to participate in. If it is a safe place, talk with your parents and tell them about your research result, which I believe will bring them relief. If it is not, I advise you to think twice. Hope you can solve the problem soon. Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写封回信给Jim,谈谈对他想到非洲做志愿者的看法，以及建议。第一步：审题体裁：书信时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般过去时。写作内容：1.对他去非洲做志愿者的看法；2.提出建议；第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be filled with; offer help to; in need; come true; bring concerns to; do some research on; think twice第三步：连词成句1. I have to admit that when I learned about your plan, I was filled with admiration for your choice.2. Volunteering in Africa will definitely offer great help to the people in need.3. I believe it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience and do hope your dream will come true.4. However, our dream shouldn’t bring concerns to those who love and care about us.5. My suggestion is to do some research on the program you plan to participate in.6. If it is not, I advise you to think twice.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改

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