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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Entering Senior One, I considered myself a “loser”, because I got a bad score in the entrance examination. I was decided to go to one of the top university to get rid of it!Honestly speaking, it was an extreme long and tough war. However, I was not afraid. All I did was to push me further toward my dream. Finally, on December 9, 2018, I got a offer from my dream university. I suddenly thought the “loser” label I have given myself. It didn’t matter any more.Now, I find myself fill with confidence. Which matters most is how much you devote to fight for your dream. 答案：【答案】1.去掉was2.university→universities3.extreme→extremely4.me→myself5.a→an6.thought后面加of7.have→had8.fill→filled9.Which→What10.fight→fighting【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍作者高一的时候认为自己是一个“失败者”，为了摆脱这个身份，作者经过艰苦长期的努力，最终收到了一流大学的录取书，也找回了自信。1.考查动词。主语I和动词decided是主动关系。故删掉was。2.考查名词单复数。one of+可数名词复数，表达的是众多…之一。故将university改成universities。3.考查副词。long是形容词，需用副词修饰，故将extreme改成extremely。4.考查代词。句意：我所能做的是进一步地鞭策自己往梦想迈进。push oneself 表达是鞭策自己，逼迫自己。主语为All I did ，所以宾语为myself。故将me改成myself。5.考查冠词。名词offer是元音音素开头，故将a改成an。6.考查介词。句意：我突然想起我一直给自己的“失败者”标签。think of表示想起，记起，故在thought后面加of。7.考查时态。主句中的谓语动词thought是一般过去时，从句谓语动词have动作的发生早于主句谓语动作，需使用过去完成时。故将have改成had。8.考查非谓语动词。动词fill和宾语myself是被动关系，需使用过去分词done作宾语补足语。故将fill改成filled。9.考查连接词。句意：最要紧的事情是你为你的梦想付出了多少。本句为主语从句，主语从句中缺少主语，所以用连接词what来引导主语从句。故将Which改成What。10.考查非谓语动词。devote to doing sth表达的是致力于做某事，to是介词，后接doing。故将fight改成fighting。

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