上周,机器人巡展在市展览馆隆重举行,学校组织大家到展览馆进行了参观。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文。1.参观了各种各样的机器人,包括新型的家居机器人、陪护机器人、教育机器人,还看了两场机器人的精彩表演;2.开阔了视野,激发了对科学的兴趣。注意:1.100词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案:【答案】Last week, we paid a visit to the exhibition hall in our city, where we saw a variety of robots. The robots on display were in different sizes and shapes. We saw some new types of robots which we hadn’t seen before, such as household robots, nursing robots and educational robots. Some robots could do a great number of things just like human beings, including playing chess, playing table tennis, playing the piano and drawing pictures. In addition, we watched two wonderful performances given by robots. This visit not only broadened our horizons, but also aroused our interest in science.【解析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文,要求写一篇报道。第1步:根据提示可知,本文为一篇报道;上周,机器人巡展在市展览馆隆重举行,学校组织大家到展览馆进行了参观。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文:1.参观了各种各样的机器人,包括新型的家居机器人、陪护机器人、教育机器人,还看了两场机器人的精彩表演;2. 开阔了视野,激发了对科学的兴趣。。时态应为一般过去时。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:exhibition hall(展览馆),robot(机器人), household(家庭的),nursing(护理),educational(教育性的),performance(表演),broaden one’s horizons(开阔眼界)及arouse one’s interest(激发兴趣)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整,思路清晰,结构紧凑,表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。