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假定你是李华。你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰，最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 进行安慰；2. 给出劝告（不要骄傲，不忘初心）；3. 具体建议（努力复习，制定学习计划）注意：1. 总词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：【答案】Dear Tom,I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness. But it’s not time for you to feel desperate. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.In my opinion, you shouldn’t be proud and just keep working hard. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Now, let me give you some advice, First of all, you must review the content that you have missed studying recently. In addition, it’s necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.I hope you could feel better and get higher grades. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华。你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰，最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：进行安慰；给出劝告（不要骄傲，不忘初心）；具体建议（努力复习，制定学习计划）。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：because of your pride and laziness（因为骄傲和懒惰）；feel desperate（感到沮丧）；Never forget why you started,（不忘初心）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

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