阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was
only ten years old.
He was at home with his elder sister Jane.
Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At
first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly
below their flat often became loud,
but he soon realised this time it was different.
"Quick!
Quick! Remove
the motorcycles from the shop, "someone
yelled.
Then
a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door
of their flat to investigate, a
thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The
motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane,
who had been playing the violin in her room,
hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the
door and along the corridor(走廊) through
the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at
the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She
turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had
no idea what she was doing, but
he followed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in
her 70s who lived next door to them, who
they called Makcik Malay for auntie. Jane began banging on Makcik's door, but
got no answer.
As the smoke thickened around them,
Tom could see many of their neighbours—some
still in their pyjamas(睡衣)—running
for safety. The
thought of fear crossed his mind.
"She might have run for safety
like everyone else!"
Tom cried. However,
Jane refused to give up. "I know
Makcik's still inside.
"She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily
routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded at the door. "Go downstairs. Go
now!Go!"
注意:
1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Tom
noticed the flame was reaching
up.……
Paragraph
2:
Luckily,some neighbors
passing by stopped and offered
help.……
答案:Paragraph 1: Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying. Paragraph 2: Luckily, some neighbours passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighbourhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.