假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate each
other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they
talked with each other on the telephone. Now more and more people use our own
mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they email
each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to
communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in
writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
答案:①去掉been ②在communicate后加with ③write →wrote ④informations →information ⑤our →their ⑥communicating →communicate ⑦在instead后加of ⑧第一个that →it ⑨第二个and →but ⑩closely →close