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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words. 答案：When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The main problem was  that I always thought in Chinese tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her . Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was good one. I was encouraged by their words.

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