假定英语课上来时要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,刪除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字宇符号(∧),并在在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 My brother, who is Harvard graduate, works in a multinational company, The company bid failed several limes in it1 s attempts to break into to Chinese market in the past two years. As a new manager on charge of the sales department, he is trying every possible mean's to promote their products. Because of he' s taken some effective measures, their profits are expecting to rise by 50% . I real take pride in my brother. What's more, he has promised to giving me live thousand yuan unlit the summer holidays come. If so, I will be able to go on vacation. How a wonderful piece of news!
答案:1.is后加a , 2. Company 后had 改为has 3.it’s改为its 4.manager后的on改为in 5.Because后of去掉 6.expecting改为expected 7.real改为really 8.giving改为give 9.until改为when或if或before 10.How改为what