On one summer night, Henry was sleeping in his room 1._______when suddenly he woke up and sensed that something 2._______unusual. He looked out of the window and finding a 3.________store nearby on the street was in fire. He immeditately 4._______shouts at the top of his voice “Fire! Fire! Help!” He 5. _______phoned 119 at once and then went out to put out fire. 6. _______but it was very big a fire that he couldn’t put it out 7. _______by himeself. Lucky enough, a lot of neighbours came out 8. _______and soon firefighters arrived. The fire was finally put out 9. _______and when the firefighters praised Henry his quick ation, 10. _______he smiled, feeling very pleased.
答案:1. 去掉on。在某一个夏日的夜晚表达为 one summer night,前不用介词。2. 去掉that. that 后加一个句子。3. finding改为found。因为与looked 并列。4. in改为 on. be on fire 意思是“在着火”5. shouts 改为 shouted。时态一致。6. fire前加 the. 特指上文出现的火灾。7. very 改为 so 意为“如此--以至于--”8. lucky改为luckily 作状语,用副词形式9. 正确10. his后加for praise sb. for意为因为某事表扬某人