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假定你是李华。你从你校国际部的招募海报得知美国高中生代表团要来你市和你校参观和交流,希望找一名在校高中生做志愿者向导。请你根据海报内容给学校国际部写一封邮件应聘志愿者。​ 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：Dear Sir or Madam,     I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer tour guide for American high school students. I suppose I am quite qualified for this job.     To begin with, I’m a fluent English speaker; consequently, I appreciate any chance to speak English with native speakers. Besides, I am well acquainted with our city 一 I was born and brought up here. As for myself, I am active, easy-going and enthusiastic and always ready to offer help to others.     I'll do my best to do this job gorgeously if I am offered this chance. Thanks for reading this letter. Yours, Li Hua 解析： 【写作指导】本题要求写一筲应用文。根据题干和海报内容可知,写邮件的内容应涉及写邮件的目的一一应聘的优势——表达期待。写作时注意以下三点: 1. 确定主体人称和时态,以第一人称和一般现在时为主。 2. 运用"三段式"结构。首段开门见山,点出写邮件的目的;次段详细陈述自己的应聘优势(扩展海报中所给的对志愿者的要求); 末段表达自己的期待。 3. 注意运用"提炼句式"的写作技巧,从零散的内容中提炼出相对复杂的句式来表达要点,提升句子表达力,并合理运用高级词汇和复杂结构提升应用文写作档次,赢得高分。 【名师点评】1.本篇范文思路清晰,逻辑严谨,结构紧凑,细节交待清楚,时态把握准确到位,读起来朗朗上口。 2. 运用了一些高级结构,如:省略了that的宾语从句,非谓语动词短语to speak English with native speakers作后置定语,if引导的条件状语从句等。 3. 高级词汇的大量使用也使文章增色不少,如:be qualified for sth.,be acquainted with sth., gorgeously等。 4. 过渡词的使用让文章逻辑更缜密,层次感更强,如:to begin with,besides 等。

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