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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;           2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China. It was an extreme unforgettable opportunity. A few days before the vacation, I applied the job online. Not long before, I was lucky enough to be given the job. Then I attended a 5-day training course as soon as the vacation begun. I was taught how to be both an informative or entertaining tour guide. This was very useful, as I have not done this type of work before. After that, every day over the followed two weeks, I gave tours around the Silk Road exhibition, that gave an interesting insight into China’s past. I was very much delighted to be praised for being a outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation. 答案：During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China. It was an  unforgettable opportunity. A few days before the vacation, I applied  the job online. Not long, I was lucky enough to be given the job. Then I attended a 5-day training course as soon as the vacation . I was taught how to be both an informative  entertaining tour guide. This was very useful, as I  not done this type of work before. After that, every day over the  two weeks, I gave tours around the Silk Road exhibition, gave an interesting insight into China’s past. I was very much delighted to be praised for being  outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation. 解析： 1．extreme→extremely．考查副词。此处修饰形容词unforgettable,故将extereme改为extremely。 2．applied后加for． 考查介词．apply当"申请"讲是不及物动词，后面接宾语时需要加介词for．apply for the job申请这份工作，故在applied后面加for． 3．before→ after． 考查副词．根据上文，我是在放假前几天申请这份工作的，此处表达"不久之后"，即"在那之后不久"，应该用after．故将before改为after． 4．begun→ began． 考查动词．begin在as soon as引导的时间状语从句中作谓语动词，结合整体时态，此处应该用动词的过去式．故将begun改为began． 5．or→ and． 考查连词．both…and连接并列的形容词，故将or改为and． 6．have→had． 考查动词的时态．本文整体时态为一般过去时，结合时间状语before，此处表达的是"过去的过去"，用过去完成时，故将have改为had． 7．followed→following． 考查形容词．此处作定语修饰名词two weeks，用形容词following（接下来的），故将followed改为following． 8．that→ which． 考查连接词．that不能引导非限制性定语从句，应改为which．故将that改为which． 9．去掉much． 考查副词．delighted是形容词，表达一种状态，应该用very来修饰；用much修饰分词形容词时往往强调动作．故去掉much． 10． a→an． 考查冠词．冠词后面outstanding的第一个发音为元音，应该用an．故将a改为an．

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