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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student held at the end of September. Unluckily, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits. 答案：The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student ∧ held at the end of September. Unluckily,                     that                          was I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of,                                         both                        subjects       去掉of my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in Our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some                                                    felt time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend.     on                            Driven There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low                         and                                    successfully spirits.

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