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初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆。回首三年时光 , 你有哪些收获 ? 即将毕业 , 你有什么感受 ? 假如你是李华 , 你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想 , 内容包括你三年学校生活的收获以及你即将毕业的感受。 提示词语 :knowledge, friend, memory, happy 提示问题 :●What have you got during the past three years? ● How do you feel upon graduation? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 例文 During the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I can get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other, too. Especially, my memory has improved a lot and I can remember much difficult knowledge. It makes me very happy. At home I can do some housework so that my parents can have more time to rest. On my way to school, I can obey the traffic rules. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it. Now I feel stressed in my study. I have too much homework to do every day and I have to stay up late to finish it, so I have no time for my hobbies. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，在写作时应结合提示词语和提示问题开展论述；主要讲述三年来的收获。 2. 例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，重点讲述自己的收获。叙述时避免汉语式英语，句意完整且条理清晰。 3. 高分亮点： 短语： get along with sb ； learn from each other ； improve a lot ； make me happy ； obey the traffic rules ； talk to my friends ； stay up late 句型： At home I can do some housework so that my parents can have more time to rest.

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