假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I'll meet you at the airport and then you will take No. 8 Bus for my home.You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn't very cold, but you needn't bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I'll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours ,
John
—They are (跳过)there.
— ________? I thought you'd met them before.
孙谦,字长逊,东莞营人也。谦年十七,为左军行参军,以治干称。父忧去职,客居历阳,躬耕以养弟妹,乡里称其敦睦。出为句容令,清慎强记,县人号为神明。泰始初,擢巴东 、建平二郡太守。郡居三峡,恒以威力镇之。谦将述职,敕募千人自随。谦曰∶"蛮夷不宾,盖待之失节耳。何烦兵役,以为国费?"固辞不受。至郡,布恩惠之化,蛮獠怀之,竞饷金宝,谦慰喻而遣,一无所纳。俸秩出吏民者,悉原除之。郡境翁然,威信大著。视事三年,征还为抚军中兵参军。元徽初,迁越骑校尉、征北司马府主簿。建平王将称兵,患谦强直,托事遣使京师,然后作乱。及建平诛,迁左军将军。齐初,为钱唐令,治烦以简,狱无系囚。及去官,百姓以谦在职不受饷遗,载绿帛以送之,谦却不受。每去官,辄无私宅,常借官空车厩居焉。永明初,为中散大夫。明帝将废立,欲引谦为心膂,使兼卫尉,给甲仗百人,谦不愿处际会,辄散甲士,帝虽不罪,而弗复任焉。天 监 六 年 出 为_零陵 太守已衰老 犹 强 力 为政 吏 民安之 先 是郡多 虎 暴 谦 至绝 迹 及 去官之_夜虎 即 害 居民 谦为郡县,常勤劝课农桑,务尽地利,收入常多于邻境。九年,以年老,征为光禄大夫。既至,高祖嘉其清洁,甚礼异焉。每朝见,犹请剧职自效。高祖笑曰∶"朕使卿智,不使卿力。"谦自少及老,历二县五郡,所在廉洁。居身俭素,冬则布被莞席,夏日无畴帐。年逾九十,强壮如五十者,每朝会,辄先众到公门。有彭城刘融者,行乞疾笃无所归,友人舆送谦舍,谦开厅事以待之。及融死,以礼殡葬之。众咸服其行义。十五年,卒官,时年九十二。
(节选自《梁书·列传第四十七》)
①父忧去职,客居历阳,躬耕以养弟妹,乡里称其敦睦。
②及去官,百姓以谦在职不受饷遗,载廉帛以送之,谦却不受。
魏有隐士曰侯赢,年七十,家贫,为大梁夷门监者。公子闻之,往请,欲厚遗之。不肯受,曰:“臣修身洁行数十年,终不以监门困故而受公子财。“公子于是乃置酒大会宾客。坐定,公子从车骑,虚左 , 自迎夷门侯生。侯生摄敝衣冠,直上载公子上坐,不让,欲以观公子。公子执辔愈恭。侯生又谓公子曰:“臣有客在市屠中,愿枉车骑过之。”公子引车入市,侯生下见其客朱亥,俾倪,故久立与其客语,微察公子。公子颜色愈和。当是时,魏将相宗室宾客满堂,待公子举酒。市人皆观公子执辔。从骑皆窃骂侯生。侯生视公子色终不变,乃谢客就车。至家,公子引侯生坐上坐,遍赞宾客,宾客皆惊。酒酣,公子起,为寿侯生前。侯生因谓公子曰:“今日赢之为公子亦足矣。赢乃夷门抱关者也,而公子亲枉车骑,自迎赢于众人广坐之中,不宜有所过,今公子故过之。然赢欲就公子之名,故久立公子车骑市中,过客以观公子,公子愈恭。市人皆以赢为小人,而以公子为长者能下士也。”于是罢酒,侯生遂为上客。
侯生谓公子曰:“臣所过屠者朱亥,此子贤者,世莫能知,故隐屠间耳。”公子往数请之,朱亥故不复谢,公子怪之。
魏安厘王二十年,秦昭王已破赵长平军,又进兵围邯郸。公子姊为赵惠文王弟平原君夫人,数遗魏王及公子书,请救于魏。魏王使将军晋鄙将十万众救赵。秦王使使者告魏王曰:“吾攻赵旦暮且下,而诸侯敢救者,已拔赵,必移兵先击之。”魏王恐,使人止晋鄙,留军壁邺,名为救赵,实持两端以观望。平原君使者冠盖相属于魏,让魏公子曰:“胜所以自附为婚姻者,以公子之高义,为能急人之困。今邯郸旦暮降秦而魏救不至,安在公子能急人之困也!且公子纵轻胜,弃之降秦,独不怜公子姊邪?”公子患之,数请魏王,及宾客辩士说王万端。魏王畏秦,终不听公子。公子自度终不能得之于王,计不独生而令赵亡,乃请宾客,约车骑百余乘,欲以客往赴秦军,与赵俱死。
例句:安在公子能急人之困也
①臣有客在市屠中,愿枉车骑过之。
②公子患之,数请魏王,及宾客辩士说王万端。
表1:
数量 |
景区1 |
景区2 |
景区3 |
甲 |
0 |
2 |
2 |
乙 |
3 |
0 |
1 |
丙 |
4 |
1 |
0 |
表2:
门票 |
景区1 |
景区2 |
景区3 |
原价 |
60 |
90 |
120 |
折扣后价 |
40 |
60 |
80 |
Recently, a painting of actress Elizabeth Taylor, which was drawn by American artist and filmmaker Andy Warhol, sold for US $63 million. Another simple black-and-white image of a Coca-Cola bottle sold for US $35 million. But the all-time record for a Warhol painting is $100 million for a piece titled “Eight Elvises”. What's amazing is not that the pieces sold for so much, but the fact that they are not what you would call traditional art. They are “pop art”, art based on simple images of things and people from advertising, movies, music and day-to-day life.
Born in the 1920s, Warhol grew up mostly separated from other children due to (由于) health problems. He spent a lot of his time alone drawing and then went on to study art in college. He began his career as a commercial (商业的) artist, creating pictures for magazine articles and newspaper ads. That inspired him to experiment with pop art and he hosted America's first pop art exhibition in the 1960s. The show met with a lot of discussion with some people saying that what he was doing was not art.
Warhol followed his first works with a series we are all familiar with — paintings of Coca-Cola bottles, Brillo soap pad boxes, and portraits (肖像) of famous people. Soon after, Warhol stopped creating his own artwork. Instead, he had assistants and other artists create them at his studio called “The Factory”. Warhol wanted to show the world that art doesn't have to be complex or original; it can be created by anyone using ordinary things.
Today, Warhol's work is unmistakable in its uniqueness. No matter how you may feel about his work, one thing cannot be argued. He introduced the world to a whole new art form, inspiring future generations of artists, and eventually becoming one of the most famous and successful pop art artists in the world.
湖南留守女孩钟芳蓉在2020年高考中考出总分676分的成绩,位居湖南省文科第四名,在报考专业时,她选择了北大考古专业,一时间引发网友热议。
有网友为她感到惋惜,说:“到就业的时候就哭了,分分钟教你做人。”
令人感到惊喜的是,钟芳蓉的偶像、敦煌研究院名誉院长樊锦诗先生为钟芳蓉送去了自己的自传《我心归处是敦煌》,并鼓励她:不忘初心,坚守自己的理想。
阅读了以上材料,你有怎样的思考和感悟?请在下列写作任务中,任选一项完成。
1)樊锦诗先生致力于莫高窟洞窟研究,把一生都献给了敦煌文物保护事业:她关心鼓励钟芳蓉这样的后辈青年,她的精神令人感佩。请你就此给樊锦诗先生写一封书信,表达你的思考和感想。
2)对于钟芳蓉的选择,你有怎样的看法,请就此写一篇议论文。
要求:结合材料内容,自选角度,自定立意;符合身份,切合语境,符合文体要求;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
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