增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and then sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

你的短文应该包含：

1）．漫画描述和反映的问题是什么；

2）．面对这样的问题，你有什么样的想法；

3）．在我们的学习生活中应该怎样正确地解决这样的问题；

4）．词数120左右。

    One of the most successful singers of the twentieth century, Ella Fitzgerald has made several different styles of her own. She was born in Virginia but was brought up in an orphanage in Yonkers, New York. Chick Webb spotted her in an amateur competition when she was sixteen. He engaged her to sing with his band and when he died in 1939, she took over.

    Unlike Bessie Smith, Ella Fitzgerald taught herself the sentimental music so popular in the 1930's — songs like “My Heart Belongs to Daddy”— and her recordings became best-sellers. During the 1940's she developed her own “scat singing” — a breathless, nonsense—syllable style—for songs like “Flying Home” and “Lady Be Good.”

    Ella Fitzgerald was the perfect musical partner for her friend, the trumpeter Louis Armstrong, matching him in warmth and artistry. “I just like music, period,” she said. “To me, it's a story. There's only one thing better than singing…. It's more singing.”

    Don't let Aurora's small stature (身高) fool you — her spirit is strong. She is one of 140 chickens 1 from a farm. When we saved her, she was tiny and sick and it seemed2 that she would survive. Having never got the right 3 ， many of the chickens were sick and some 4 died.

    At a young age, Aurora and her sisters and brothers were 5 by their mom. Luckily, another mother 6their care. Aurora seemed the last to 7 food and attention. She grew at a much slower 8 than her brothers and sisters. Everything seemed 9her.

    At the young age of seven months, Aurora had lost two moms and was 10 to find a place with the other chickens.

    Aurora 11 found comfort from an old chicken named Margaret, staying under her wings during the cold nights, 12 Margaret was so old that a few months later she died. Aurora, in her own way, thinks of Margaret. Every evening, you will find her in the 13 spot where she kept Margaret company. 14 when the other chickens try to 15her away, Aurora comes back.

    As Aurora grew, we became 16 at her love to simply live. Nothing 17 her.

    So remember, when life seems so 18 that you can't take it, think of Aurora. She has lost two moms, watched her sisters and brothers die, and 19 from serious illnesses. Yet she enjoys the small, sweet 20life has offered — safety, food, warmth and good friendships.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    WeChat is becoming increasing popular with people. Recently I have made a survey among my classmates about the use of WeChat. According to a result, 45% of the classmates admit they often use it because comparing with other means of communication, WeChat has more advantage. It was cheap, convenient and easy to send all kinds of messages around. Besides, 35% of they are against using it, saying it will affect their study. Not using WeChat, the rest has no opinion about it. As far as I'm concerned, since WeChat offers us great convenience, it should be made good use. We should not be slaves to it or let it to govern our minds and behaviors.

    Reducing the amount of sleep affects students' performance at school. An American study asked schoolteachers to look at the effects of sleep restriction（限制） on children between six and twelve years of age. The teachers found that children who stayed up late had trouble thinking clearly and had more learning problems.

    Doctor Fallone now works at the Forest Institute of Professional Psychology in Springfield, Missouri. He presented the results last month at a science reporter conference in Washington, D. C. The Publication Sleep also reported the findings.

    The teachers were asked to complete weekly performance reports on seventy-four schoolchildren. The study lasted three weeks. During that period, Doctor Fallone and his team controlled the amount of sleep the children received.

    During another week, every child was kept awake later than normal. Each night, the youngest boys and girls had less than eight hours of sleep. The older ones were limited to six and a half hours. During the final week of the study, each child received no less than ten hours of sleep a night.

    The teachers were not told about how much sleep the students received. The study found that students who received eight hours or less had the most difficulty remembering old information.

    The study did not find that sleep restriction caused hyperactivity(极度活跃) in the children.

    Doctor Fall one said that the results provided experts and parents with a clear message: